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topical

Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 1:37 pm
by FlipSide
A functional official medicinial elixir
Ill mix ya like an occasional drinker
In life ya spirits like religion for feeling
the pull of the fish ya reelin for feeding
is the size of your reason ta bargain
stashed inside of a closet no flossin
ta live like ya starving n say ya ballin
In the court of the bosses with causes
put forth into motion enclosin opponents
wit an overwhelming proportion of sources
Ta manuver the cources smooth on da forces
no birthing a style with forceps ta force kids
like child labor for a garment ta make ya
shirt off ya back ta rape like they raped em
an equal form of a payment in beliefs of the pagans
Its sadist the ways of the chosen to make it
jus replace the choice with a desicion ta take it

Re: topical

Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 3:40 pm
by deafshady
no birthing a style with forceps ta force kids
like child labor for a garment ta make ya
shirt off ya back ta rape like they raped em
an equal form of a payment in beliefs of the pagans

That part had such graphic n I fuckin love it n good writing dude n keep up

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Re: topical

Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:03 am
by P.Picasso
put forth into motion enclosin opponents
wit an overwhelming proportion of sources
Ta manuver the cources smooth on da forces
no birthing a style with forceps ta force kids
like child labor for a garment ta make ya

These Stuck Out The Most For Me...This Verse Had A Few Pauses So I'd Over Read And Throw Myself Off The Flow Other Then That...Keep It Poppin' And Keep Droppin'

Re: topical

Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:31 am
by FlipSide
thanks my dude

Re: topical

Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 3:52 pm
by DaPrince
I was gonna try and pull out some lines that I liked but I thought the whole piece was dope. Keep it up bro.