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Defs a juggernaut N nigga U not!
Im rollin the dice, thrown'em twice, flowin nice!
Wipin my bloody dick on a teddy bear,
iz how Im makin a 4yr old cry twice...!
Feel dis...
as I spit da realist topics!
Ill open ya dome...!
like a split beaver dats spread eagle N gaze in2 ur secrets!
Gothic, cryptic, I spit through richters,
my vibrations R seismic
Poems of chrome N chronic, da pulse's R sonic!
Grab a mic N spit shit slick N slightly ebonic,
no guarantee upon bricks!
Rail dem infectious white lines in reflection.
Razorbladed salvation, my temptations filled
This day brings da void, fear, rifles,
N knifes wit God at da rear,
Da buildings seem to have fallen, but da foundation remains
Ground zero N patriotism, strength in flame!
Terrorist attacks N desperate acts,
How could dis happen?
Couldnt conceive da actions!
gunshots at distance,
Enemies captured in resistance
Fuck dem cowards, Bitch,
im physically N mentally powered
Im talkin famous, ur barkin lameness.
A soul? is dark in da trench N da flames iz hot I guess!
Bench pressin bars, is what Def does best!
lapses wit ounces, vests dont protect from axes N Dogma,
around of drinks for my dawgs, Ma!
Fuck da hustle, we B raw, relaxin in spas, yah!
Blow on da table, hoes once upon a time N I aint talkin fables!
Goin toe 2 toe, N turnin da table,
if intelligence enables pride, Im on Hawkings label!
How can someone so Def, hear screams so loudly!
How can he spit so proud N profoundly
Im Def, not blind, but da light rebounds off da canopy!
Im a Cyborg beaten a Bi, bored as fuck, man.
Wit a gun in each hand, luck is avoidin da fam
when we out causin a ruckus, fuck this.
Bitch you couldnt make a youtube top ten list!
Duck this, punchs flyin bitchs frontin!
I seldom flee, still Canadian as Maple trees!
I hope heavens free,
so I can afford da fee smokin trees
Ya I rhymed da same word, Nigga! SO WHAT!
Ill ware ur skin coat poetically
like walkin a trench in a trench coat
smokin endo, blow in da peace-pipe
holdin a piece N a pipe! JESUS CHRIST!
Im Ill, I hear Children Spit like Pacewon.
Eyes on da floor, a bitch faces none!
Proud of my estate.
Da foundations forged on stolen land
I'll 'B-Real' as an American Physco
I live Shackled N trapped, da curse of lethal choke!
Ill make a relationship meet horrorcore!
The gender wars are more than just a metaphor.

Had some cool rhymes. Flowed nice... It was all over the place though. I think you should write on a specific topic. But it was an alright read. Keep it goin son

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Thx yo,

Ya I tend to like to cover a lot of substance when I rhyme.
This was more of a keystyle then anything. I just sat down and started writing.

bro to me this flowed well but kinda cut off bars in structure... i think as they are supposed to be...i dunno it was a long drop so i just did the continous read... I like it tho..tight lines but like rip said all over...

This was purdy sick
the flow is different
and the lines were nice
some of it could be worded differently tho'
like some things were almost like AHHHHHH
but then they weren't living up to the previous lines
I'd quote some ish but I'm at work