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o shit here we go a battle of two new comers both of them trying to elevate more then just thier hatred for each other

ok 6 bars due 4 days from check in

house rules

vote on

opener
punches
multi
personals
flow
complexity/creativity
closer

good luck

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-- Thu May 27, 2010 12:05 am --

Yo, so lyrically it's clear we have our differences drastically
My punches will make you my bitch and cut you- "literally a masterpiece"
Bitch ya raps ain't hard, they null- i'm barely impressed
cause shady "ends beats" like cardio pulmonary arrest
Like I guess you wanted death, "battlin me" is clearly stupid
Mentally crazy, cause "Deafshady" don't got "an ear for music"
Bring your best with your simple text- try to belittle Catch
I'll "beat this pussy 10 times" like i "just fucked with your single X" *
Gettin rep? Naw, just let these raps replenish
You were "given a bad flow" like you're iatrogenic*
This bastard's finished, diminished and he's stuck to his haikus
Call him George W Bush, "can't hear the public don't like you"


10 is X in roman numerals..
Iatrogenic- Due to the action of a physician or a therapy the doctor prescibed. An iatrogenic disease may be inadvertently caused by a physician or surgeon or by a medical or surgical treatment or a diagnostic procedure.

Listen dude stop, it's clear your losing as you watch,
...Me stick my foot up your ass...
...............Til i'm wearin your intestines for tube socks.
And I'm not lying, your attempts dude'll get ripped quick,
Cause i've seen better shots <-- at the special olympics.
So please give up...cause effortless, Deaf is crushin you,
Truth is...
...Only you connect on illest <-- none of your punches do.
you suck it's true...wack multis, plus...this man is a fairy.
So fuck a grave site <-- where you stand; you'll get burried.
Peep'em out...AK noob bodied you...your just lame as shit,
Plus your lines couldn't touch <-- should change to script.
You get no pussy too kid...
Last time he was hit up by a bitch <-- was a vertical smack.
But Listen your skills garbage, Deaf's known to kill bars quick,
You on the other hand...
Known for handlin more male privates <-- then a drill seargent.
You spill nonsense on illest;...so i'll give this fuckin kid a beatin,
And althou illest hates your guts <-- there comfy for our semen.
you Cock sucker; you wont win SON, DEaF's crushin this fairy,
You maybe broke, indeed...
I get paid by your mom, child support; just for son'n you daily

opener- catch 22
punches- toss up
multi-deafshady
personals- tie
flow- catch-22
complexity/creativity- catch22
closer- catch 22

vote Catch22.. shit was just better written actually made me laugh

As much as i'd like to DQ this... there is still no proof of Deaf Shady's Cousin ghost writing for him... if Shady's Cousin came to the site on A DIFFERENT NAME and told us he ghost wrote the whole verse... then its a DQ... if he helped write his verse like giving him pointers "Oh you should say it like this" then its considered swaying... but like i said there is no proof of Deaf Shady's cousin ghost writing for him even if he admitted it on yahoo aim msn whatever... becuz of the fact of the bad blood between Catch and Deaf i am not gonna let that sway my decision to DQ... as of now the vote stands 1-0 UNLESS Deaf Shady's cousin comes out in the open and says "I GHOST WROTE HIS RAP" (DQ) or "I HELPED HIM" (Swaying) BOTH TERMS OF DISQUALIFICATION!!!! the next time this happens maybe you should read the rules and take into consideration of the other Emcee ur battling... they have no help so how is it fair to them if u have a second party come in and help you??? NOT THAT FAIR!!!! if this shit happens again i will PERSONALLY disqualify ANY EMCEE that claims they were helped or ANY EMCEE that starts shit... if you have a problem my PM is free for suggestions and comments... take it how u want hate it or love it but as of now the votes stand keep voting!!!!!!!

ok thank you lawgix

ill edit my vote in here in a second

opener - catch
punches - catch
multi - deaf
personals - catch
flow - catch had way better flow
complexity/creativity - catch
closer - catch

deafs verse really didn't hit that hard... i think if he had some personals he woulda had atleast a shot... catch's just hit harder was more effective i'd say deaf u need to work on punches and personals just roam the site to look for any kind of personal u can find on people... do ya research...

vote catch

2-0 catch uppin!!!!

-- Sat May 29, 2010 10:42 am --

kay

still 2-0 in Catch's favor... LETS GET THIS BATTLE CLOSED!!!!





uppin

opener- Catch
punches - both each had one that stuck out after i read
multi- (catch 3 lines with solid multis) (deaf i seen one solid line and 2 other attempts) so im goin with Catch
personals-catch had 2 that i knew and i think they were the easy shots. deaf had one but threw in the computer stuff which i like more than the shots from catch about deaf bein deaf. so goin with DEAF
flow- CATCH. i read deafs a couple time just to try to find the beat
complexity and creativity- though i like the computer punches not that creative but the pulmonary beat line nice goin with CATCH
closer-hated deafs closer. it was a stretch to link it back terrible flow as i read it and didnt leave me with ne feelin but that was dumb.catch's was another shot about the deaf part bu i like it and it got me laughin so... Catch

as a whole whoever wrote deafs i feel had those punches premade and inserted them it felt forced
catch was fluid decent punchlines could have worked more for punches that we didnt expect but... im goin with Catch

3-0 KO, can someone close this?

yup

-battle closed records updated-