Hip Hop Forum

k so since i haven't dropped any audios lately i'll give u some stuff i've wrote on my phone either at work on break or at home bored haha

yo an eye for an eye a debt for a debt
i collect checks either your last breath

or i'll accept sex i wreck sets lets dance
like we in the wild west my wild mind set

gets u in depth with death fuck it i'm done
talkin cuz once i see you your body gonna be

outlined n chalk'n i'm stalkin the hardest
that claim that lame shit i'll tame this

bitch like a dog you remain shit turnin my
tricks my meal ticket is in my hand so u can

say that i am hungry as shit what u talkin bout?
shut ya mouth or end up in stitches with all that

lip u spout me? never doubt eat pussies like burgers
in n out oh you thirsty? i'll bring water for ya drought

you talk too much bitch walk it out sick of you goin
on about how your gonna knock me out our beefs in

vain fuck with me n my sting will be worse
than a needle hittin a vein this beef leaves

me entertained my sights are within range you
cringe with you see my have ya gap teeth

rearranged! my lyrics? hella spicy you just
keep yours plain send ya body back to ya

home on the range my spits are more gusty
like wind sweepin plains n i stay on more

tracks than some amtrak trains missouri is
my territory boy you step inside this vicinity

end up in purgatory my imagery is hella gorey
but it tells a story of how i made ya comatose

body leap from 10 stories your spits bore me
like i'm stuck in a waiting room u can't

respond to my call of duty when ur playin doom
cuz i could walk into a college and have all the

whores know me throw 5 different parties in separate
dormitories spout at the mouth catch more blood

than suppositories im hella wicked with this
shit son so don't u ever snore me!!!

shit is written poorly... or stuctured poorly..

but none the less i figured out how to flow it, some dope shit man. i dont know if it was post to be fast or slow rap, but fasgt worked for me

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vain fuck with me n my sting will be worse
than a needle hittin a vein this beef leaves

me entertained my sights are within range you
cringe with you see my have ya gap teeth

decent but i've seen and heard better from you

thats why i don't drop writtens... but that was just some shit i had on my phone n shit thanx for the feed bruh!

Shit was weird law.... It took me a minute to figure the scheme out a lil.... I kno i got a problem with writing cuz i write like i do my audios and to me theres a line between writing to look good or writing to sound good..but thats me...other than that i saw some imagery in there which was cool

thats me thats how i write... i write what will sound good not what will look good haha... cuz either way its goin on Audio...

for shure .... i would like to hear it

i may spit it to a beat who knows... but i'm sure it will be different to ya as soon as u hear it on a beat...