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ok the first battle for 2010's summer battle league will be creative vs qwarter

6 bars 4 days from check in

vote on

opener
punches
personals
flow
multis
complexity
closer

good luck to both of you

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I Packed A Mac & A Oozy, Reload in Text Wit Sound Effects of "Click-Clack" You Can't Move Me,
Check This Hoe... Zone's Posing 4 The Shot & These Clips Will Make em Roc n Stretch Like A Projector Film Rolls 4 A Movie!!

This Nigga Dirt Cheap Don't Even Wanna Spit First, Z Says "Check" 4 The Ink Press of His Kicked Verse, Underground Rapper? It Ain't A Common Lie Since You Often Find Qwarterz Beneath Ya Shoe On The Walk Outside!!

I Manslaughter With Knives & A Death Threat, Z Reppin His Best Lines Is A Secret Best Kept, When A Judge Orders Sum Time.. In Depth It's A Damn "25 Ta Life" Expressed Death Sentence!! (25 Ta Life Is His Only Popular Line)

No Sketch But You Under Heavy Fire, A Steady Liar Wit The Image You Seem 2 Profess, Impressed On Ya Neck n Chest Is A Brand Of Semi-Iron, 1 Ink Blot I'll Leave A Gap Greater Than Between Ya Sig & The Cat Of Cheshire!! (Leave A Big Space In Him)

Z Another Rapper I'll Knock U Down & After It'll B Sequence in Order, Yeah Its Pun Intended Shit I Got A Hitlist, But Wait n Get This.. It Aint Hard 2 Spot Z, I Visit The Arcade Regularly Just 2 Pop A Qwarter!!

I Craft Art & Skill Like A Magic Marker, Z Swallow Xtaci Pills n Get High 4 The Next Departure, Murk Z? Sure I'll Kill em On Q.. If The Price is Right Featuring Bob Barker!! (Kill em 4 A Right Price)

bump....my bad didn't see this

bump....my bad didn't see this

I Only Posted 6 Bars n You Bumpin Already?? Hurry Up n Key Yo Shit Then I Ain't Battling 4 My Health Ya Know!

*ahem*

How dude dephict pain and switch names like he really spit sick game?
your flow Rick James, fuck'd up, you mad homo ever since I seen he promotes Dick Slang*

for the record 21 rhymes edited 21 times I'm tryna connect the whole thing
I guess repeating the same shit like Pac, really does keep you thought provoking

peep game I wouldn't get @ U if your Cre@tive ThoUght actually made sense
I mean battle? your 8x10, in the pocket pussy and I'm on my panty raid, SICK

your bars lack some convenience, plus your quotes suck dick and really lack of achievement
I swear you wouldn't have a stroke of genius, if Einstein let u grab it while he's flashin his penis

I'ma rip ya ovaries, then toast ya spleen serve it sunnyside up and then just piss over it
it's over quick, you spilt milk too many times 0 props soundclick break fast n Get Over It**

if Cre@t!ve really had thought all the extra symbols wouldn't be necessary
but like your avy I'ma tell you the truth homie your flare is only temporary

* http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/the-d ... 16520.html

** http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/get-o ... 15869.html

opener-QZ
punches-Creative
personals-QZ
flow-QZ
multis-creative
complexity-Creative
closer-creative

ok after all the things where worked out i have revised my vote

creative you had better multis but some where forced so flow went to qz and qz your new closer was a lil weaker than ur first so creative got the new vote...

great battle its still close but that lil confusen slowed it down

Umm X.. The Battle Aint Even Finished You Said 8 Bars But You Can Keep Ya Vote, I Aint Sweatin No Doubt

Okay Ppl We Can Vote Now Qwarterzone's in Favor 0-1 Sheesh

o shit i didnt reall pay attention due to the fact that all the other ppl really only dropped six ill edit it once its finished

opener - Creative
punches - QZ
personals - Creative
flow - QZ
multis - tied
complexity - i'd say QZ
closer - Creative

soooo this is a hard one to judge dude both verses were hard and funny as hell haha so lets break it down...

Creative:

you had alot of run ons and really didn't seem too neat to be quite honest... it was a good 6 bars but it was really hard to read along with... so i'd say structure needs work (u can take my words or leave em either way just my thoughts) lol... newayz back to ya verse u had some good shit... out of the whole verse i liked:

"This Nigga Dirt Cheap Don't Even Wanna Spit First, Z Says "Check" 4 The Ink Press of His Kicked Verse, Underground Rapper? It Ain't A Common Lie Since You Often Find Qwarterz Beneath Ya Shoe On The Walk Outside!!"

and

"I Craft Art & Skill Like A Magic Marker, Z Swallow Xtaci Pills n Get High 4 The Next Departure, Murk Z? Sure I'll Kill em On Q.. If The Price is Right Featuring Bob Barker!! (Kill em 4 A Right Price)" << haha on both those verses

you aimed at him pretty good... some okay personals liked how u made fun of his Avatar haha... so good verse man...

QZ

your structure is nice liked how u kept it easy to read... you had the funniest bar i think by far tho haha... but there was really only one line i liked and it was:

"your bars lack some convenience, plus your quotes suck dick and really lack of achievement
I swear you wouldn't have a stroke of genius, if Einstein let u grab it while he's flashin his penis" << i LUL'd at that

but to be quite honest... my vote goes too Creative he had more hard hitting lines that seemed to stand out more than QZ but QZ had a good verse too... just didn't hit hard enuff IMO...

so vote Creative gets my vote 1-1 Tied Uppin Votes!!!!!

i promised id revote after the battle was officially done

creative 2-0