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float limitless post images of dope princesses
I'm so in a twist my own precedence flows in a jist
I broke in a flip, open'd with a twist so in a fist
I won't slip a bit, I wrote senselessness so quick its sick
so pick a writ, poke it with a finger or a broken stick
see if it's alive, if it strives and the difference flies
then in this mind innocence lies, within it's cries
is such intimate ties to imagelike shadows is it life?
is it demented times or is it in my eyes this dimension strives
tell me if I'm fine, if I'm nice then this whole sense of mine
is so timid I'm startin' to mimic life twisted in afflicted crimes
I am so fit with sin I'm dephicted like a exquisite splice
of sickened hearts, I can't help tryna fit in, fitting in's hard....
if I'm fitted in can I fix it so it can be fitted in my twisted heart?
and if I can't fix it am I just a thoughtless being unfitted, hark....
I hear the bellows, the cries...

dont know why u dont have more feeds on this piece except maybe the princess thing but its nice no one line stands out but the whole thing is hot ive read it a few times just dont know what to say.ive read a lot of drops for only ein here a short minute i think ur one of my favorites though to be fair i would need to expand on the artist i review. ne way keep it up is there a way to " subscribe " so u know when certain members do a new drop

u make writing in multies look ez... i dunno how long it takes u but a piece of this caliber( in my eyes ) would take a while to write... Many quotables lots of info in there too...very creative as well

I won't slip a bit, I wrote senselessness so quick its sick
so pick a writ, poke it with a finger or a broken stick
see if it's alive, if it strives and the difference flies
then in this mind innocence lies, within it's cries
is such intimate ties to imagelike shadows is it life?

that made me think a lil...given the state of mind my views of concepts is in...i thought this was hot