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lil somethin i seen up so i had to lace it ya kno? lemme kno what ya think!

Produced By: Chris Mecca

Hook By: Marka

Verses By: Tramatik

guess whos back i aint tryna complain
ya i fell off track thought i lost my flame
had to hang it on the rack gettin lost in the rain
yall think im wack thats the cost of the game
but ii dont think that they knoo nothins here for show
im'a do it on my ownn and thats the way it goess
cuz i aint gonna be another stereotype
on the stereo like 'im'a carry the mic
hell ya make sure that the areas tight'
fuck that man im'a fuckin bury it tonight
cuz i aint gonna let myself down again
not gonna be alone in this town again
got my pen and my pad thats all i need
fuck the world man just let em all bleed

lemme talk to god for a minute if i cud
finally gotta job but its misunderstood
all the time that i write just aint addin up
everyday that i fight i wanna say i had enough
cuz yall dont get it and i doubt that u will
so finally admit it dont pout cuz its real
i aint never gonna quit it till i shout an squeal
on this mic i been fitted u about to feel
the wrath of my soul on this path ill unfold
till i smash on theses hoes never ask cuz i kno
whatcha gonna do when i doo it
i kno u hataz gon lose it
cuz i aint never gonna stop
so why shud i have to proove it
i never been the one to be foolish
i tell u right now im the truest

when i wake up if i dont see the sunshine
im'a hit the road keep goin put in some time
till the sun riise if the sun dies
i still gotta chance got one try
im'a live by these stars an stay lite
brighter then a constellation u hate it
lookin like some old jeans u faded
yet u say im the one whos jaded
now i gotta disagree i dont like that
im'a tight kat givin it right back
they like tmt u aint goin nowhere
im like whatchu tryna say that aint no fair
tip the hour glass round till theres none left
put my heart on the line right till death
feel my pulse increase with each step
never crossin over till my last breath

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haha cool pic on the you tube..

quality on the hook is lined right imo..

on my system verse sounds pretty nice.

ya swags gettin a lil better..

like the rythm on the 2nd verse ..not bad..

all in all this one's closer to a Professional sound then the rest i heard from ya..good to see you still doin ya thing...1

well it has been a minute since i've heard anything from ya... so let me break it down... i don't think the beat fit u well enuff for ur swag... ur flow was kinda strange kinda like u were still readin off the paper... even tho u have come up and started flowin a lil bit better... it has some potential but i honestly don't think the beat fits u... it was a cool listen tho good to hear ur back doin ur thing... keep it up tho... just look for beats that aren't shitty but simple...

I think the beat is hot...and i see some swagg in there but i think u should have came harder for this beat.. A lil more crisp i would say...good written tho.. And like dude above said it does sound like a lil reading... but i got that problem it goes away with practice i guess..... but its hot kid...keep consistently droppin..u got style and thats worth a ton in book..emotion is key!