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Stuck within a rabbit hole that's so big it could swallow this fucking planet whole//
But Imma stay accountable, man enough to handle what has happened// So..
...time to sneak away & be a slave to the government, May 7th is when I have to go//
Stuck in this old rich white mans system, a corrupted system built over the land they stole...//
...from the Mexican's & Indians, the killings of many men, hey I guess that's natural// What's sad is those...
... cannibals

Dopest part by far. the wordplay is dope, the subject was serious. overall it was a hot drop.

8.6/10

Nice post

was a lil lost at first.. when u said doing 6 again.. i was like.. 6 years jesus... but later u say months..

Over all Solid drop
Some good emotion in some lines..
Liked the flow int he beginning of the Second verse the most
the first verse it was hit or miss in places

i thought the Sack lunches was ya best BAR personaly

keep postin

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I think im gonna look at this piece a whole because i see that every bar mattered in it... not just which line was hot cuz when u put ur emotion into it it cant be separated... As a whole i like the first half more.... u came hard on the ending tho... nice emotional drop...would like to hear audio for this tho

Right before that beat build up I was like nice
then afterwards errythin' started flowing very fluently
I'm diggin' this piece my dude! really writing a lot like you said eh? keep doing you! another nice piece!

I'm diggin' this piece. The way you flipped the multies into this drop and made it flow nicely was dope. I love tha deep stuff and the storytellin' is a 10 plus. I aint know you were goin' to jail tho. Stay up.