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Watch ya pockets bitch.. mics i rock it with rocks over fist
Harder that diamond tipped bits of spits that stink like pits
Im hood rich quick ta slap ya bitch and give er a face lift
Raze legit sets, put me out? not with hydrants those for kids
My fires migrant like mexicans and ill spray a tan on manymen
I offer kids "candy man" like the chi projects in a minivan
Ill shoot with any hand at cha craps ambidextrous raps
Ya sand paper wack hurt my hemoroids when i wipe my ass
Now who da fuck next like whores i put saddles on backs
Fuck text i hurt a bitch at the end of the pad.... period
When ya cramp my styles i push shit at it then get off toilets
on some sick shit bile packaged in vials ta sell ta kids
Put the vag on you cuz we all see the real u when stripped
wit a bet spin the rullete at odds with starvation ya chance is slim
Of makin it like kids reffering to sex when they aint drop yet
Balls on they chin? tea party republicans look like peter griffin
So im nailin palin cuz she carrys the party like carnival cruiseships
And yall loose slips sinkin tha romance for raps like da titanic
My balls gigantic.. had godzilla jealous and frantic with antics
Climbin my empire state like a savage ta pick out a bitch?
my leftovers kid.. pump ya dick cuz da pussy so big ull fall in it
Pop the profet dat said no to sex ill empragnate a whole esophagus
Or pop pearl necklaces over this site like da gallpagos islands
Im in your face,inside ya eyelids sticky pages on the whole atlas
Postmark This ahaha pull out my dick when asked my age for cigarretes
Im sick-wit-it ..like that crack? gimmie it,Hollow head? smokin it
Pheens wit food stamps for bags with HIV Supporting me.. idiots
(Oh hollow head right) shake like a spray can in broad day light
with the lead inside no bleedin cuz his thoughts grafitty write?
Wrong i streak ina thong and they jaws drop cuz my toned buns
Tote guns runnin on ya set ta rob for fun put packs in my package
Imma mutha fuckin savage retarted finish the fight u started
cuz u brain farted and im interested in your mommy

LOL i think this shit was funny but oh well im feelin silly

if shit fell up id drop one on you ^^^

too be honest it was purdy dope, a different route for you I think
some decent lines in there, but your pic in the avy kinda throws off the vibe...ehhhhh

keep writing tho'


My fires migrant like mexicans and ill spray a tan on manymen
I offer kids "candy man" like the chi projects in a minivan
Ill shoot with any hand at cha craps ambidextrous raps
Ya sand paper wack hurt my hemoroids when i wipe my ass
Now who da fuck next like whores i put saddles on backs
Fuck text i hurt a bitch at the end of the pad.... period
^^^^^^^^^^^LoL @ a that first part reminds me of Kanye's Diamonds joint

lol Kanye? Dunno but it was worth a try on some silly shit...and damn i hate that nigga souljaboy
Good looks ...

Im sick-wit-it ..like that crack? gimmie it,Hollow head? smokin it
Pheens wit food stamps for bags with HIV Supporting me.. idiots

my favorite line by far. that joint was ll over place though man.

Wrong i streak ina thong and they jaws drop cuz my toned buns
Tote guns runnin on ya set ta rob for fun put packs in my package
Imma mutha fuckin savage retarted finish the fight u started
cuz u brain farted and im interested in your mommy

idk what you was tryin ta do with this ending but it was hard to follow. anyways not a bad drop for you feeling silly i guess.
6.8/10

thanks for the feed bros.. i know im still on sum mad simplistic shit.. but to syph.. i thought i was gettin a couple multies in there... guess i aint got that shit down yet... And to citi... i kno i kind of just lost my head and its a key too.. i cant just go back n change shit once its written..something i havent brought my self to do... but need to do...so i will do lol aiight thanks a lot for the feed it helps a lot..