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Its everymen for himself/
like nobody recognizes your ability your covered in stealth/
gonna make it by myself, I don't need no help man/
see messin wit me, that aint good for your health man/
till I get big its back to studio, back to the lab/
back to my room wit a pen and a pad/
so I can write some rhymes, lines to go with the flow/
its like I bust I freestyle so hot it lit up the dro/
im fightin in a battle against all odds/
to be claimed as a God, get five mics on my debut like Nas/
have these other sucka emcees fear the air that breathe/
proceed, to give you what you need, livin in greed/
you can be, on the corner one day slangin CDs/
then the next day you're the biggest thing on TV/
it seems, everybodys dream, is to get that cream/
before they another teen, body found on the murder scene/
you betta watch yo back, im quick to react/
strapped, this is more then just combat/
this is fiction against fact, real and truth/
forget about all that bullshit you heard in the booth/
cause I aint gon stoop/
to the low level of rappin bout bitches, drugs, and coupes/
man, this is ruthless, this is how my crew spits/
and this makes fake rappers feel pain when the truth hits

good job man very nice flow and consistency

cool 8.2

Concept Was Straight.
Flow was good.
No lines that really stuck out.
It was well worth the read though.
8.5/10

I agree wit complexity, it was tight witta kool concept, i liked the read..