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I dunno man. The shit flowed real well, was kinda all over the place tho. I was expectin sum newyork lyrical shit, cus ur right, erry cat wanna bust sumtn in raps nowadays. And from the read, It sounds like ur the reason for alotta shit in ny. Haha. Worth the read specially cus I aint really been on lately. I thought toyh was finna make me think a lil but all in all, this my type of shit fareal. Grimey type of shit. Kinda more west coast swag from my pov. But good shit pimpin, I was feelin it.
8.5/10 cus I'm sure you've dropped doper shiet

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Pretty solid shit, the multies were basic for the most
Part, yet not forced and still effective with executing
Them into a smooth flow, decent shit.

thought this shit is descent and on point with that new york shit...i remember when i was out there niggas was on that same type of flow... but theres diversity up there as well... Hip Hoppers and rappers differentiate...Mos def...Fab... but for the most part i was feeling the muties...gave the piece of sort of continuity that im lookin to get... every day i learn... Over all good read^^

I've seen much better from you, but I'll credit you with changing things up. The flow was on point, multies were present yet basic, but not overly simplistic. Overall, smooth and cocky, which is the style I associate with NY.

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This had a lot of decent lines
I'm glad to see you back in the scripture area tho'
very nice work! I like the whole thing to tell you the truth

but the second verse took the cake!

Flow was really good, wasn't a huge fan of the lyrics. I think it would sound really good on audio, but it wasn't really mind provoking. I don't know much about New York hip hop, but I know a lot about west coast shit and I can't tell the difference between this and SoCal/Vegas rap if this is what it's all about.

Feelin the swag on the quagmire rhyme
AND the flyer than nate rhyme was hella filthy.

But the shoot this shit bust this clip stuff was not appealin to me.. like i dont know you dog you could be straight G but I don't see poetic value in talkin about endin human life unless that's really what you stand for and the message you wanna rep and bring. and if so, coo dogg so be it just make sure you're not compensating values and art for the wrong reasons

dope all around. i read it with the new york sound in my head so i think it fits the bill

7/10