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Just got my laptop back and wanted to show you guys some off the shiz I've been writing, I would really appreciate feed on the mixing because that's the area that I need to improve on right now.

-K

http://www.reverbnation.com/#/artist/so ... ls/3854361

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shits dope man... drop the beat down a bit n u'll be golden homie... lyrics are tight sounds like a kid cudi joint... good shit bro...

Aiight good looking Law.

shit is tight.... flow is on point... like some young jay shit.... The beat is a lil high or lyrics a lil low tho... shit is tight

Thanks for the feed.

I just put the full version up and I replaced the link.

Good looking on the feed man.

aight dis is wats up ur def improvin' which is good like how u flowed on dat track and liked how u flipped it I actually wasn't expectin' dis which is a good thing hook does need improvement tho and ur quality is aight needs work but it's koo I could hear it so dats wats important keep droppin' tracks dawg 7/10

-- 03 May 2010 19:13 --

aight dis is wats up ur def improvin' which is good like how u flowed on dat track and liked how u flipped it I actually wasn't expectin' dis which is a good thing hook does need improvement tho and ur quality is aight needs work but it's koo I could hear it so dats wats important keep droppin' tracks dawg 7/10

Thanks for the feed, appreciate it.

aight man i was waitn for a chance to be around sum speakers to leave some feed. it was worth the wait dawg. this shit is hyped, wit some old skool, and deffy a hip hop hit. the beat was dope. the type of shit i would like to get down to. lyrics sounded alot cleaner than what youve worked on before. shiiiiiiit i was lookin thru ma projects and found the one we was supposed to wrk on. my fault on the lag. but afta hearin this, if u still interested, this quality soundin waaaay better. but back to ur joint, the effects was ku dawg. nutn too over powerin. just right imo. um.....what else.........fuck. i dunno dawg this shit was straight. the mixin was pretty good. jus about a couple low spots here and there, but thats jus a producer's ear. im supposed to catch shit like that. dope dope. hit me


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