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i feel ur lyrics bro, i m deaf but i can feel to it, keep up

not bad for a freestyle man, I'm all about poems off the top. It's hard to do but fun.

"Every Once in A While Tha Blank Stares Turn To Scouls
Scouls That Remain Unpleasant it's Almost As if They Leave Lacerations
As A Person i Remain Unmarred But My Mind Suffers From These images
it's Almost As if They're Branded into Tha Back Of My Mind
Sometimes i Look Past it All Only To Let My Eyes Unveil Hidden Tears
But No Matter How Far i Look Ahead i Always Find Myself Back Here"

I like this ^ can't tell you how many times I've felt like this, overall not bad for a freestyle man, keep em comin.

No problem homie. Thanks for the feed on mine. Good shit

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