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free flowing poetry 3

Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 11:42 am
by Borat
The last time I seen you like this I made promise.
Not only to you, to myself also.
I promised to never fall apart when you need someone
Here to put you back together.

Believe me... I never meant to burn you
With the fire between us... I was only trying to keep you warm.
You walk around like the floor beneath you isn't crumbling.
Like... like the sky above you is still gonna be there in the morning.

It makes me sick... of counting sheep.
Thinkin I will see you in my sleep.
But when you appear, you dissapear, and leave me with nothing to keep.
Your gone.

And that's simply because I allowed you to slip.
I couldn't stop myself from hating myself so simply... I split.
You've always been the better half of me.
I've always been the better half of you.

Let's connect and be one again.
Name "us" me.

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Re: free flowing poetry 3

Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 7:17 pm
by M-Vario
You walk around like the floor beneath you isn't crumbling.
Like... like the sky above you is still gonna be there in the morning.

helluva visual there.
i only have one complaint...should have been longer lol

Re: free flowing poetry 3

Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 8:06 pm
by Borat
Haha word. Ran outta juice tho... I'm sure by free flow poetry 20 they will be hella long haha

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Re: free flowing poetry 3

Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 4:45 pm
by Borat
Preciate the feed man thank you

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