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Mutual P.S. I Did Not Write The Hook It's On The Instrumental

Hook
When It's Hard To Sleep
As The Plot As Grows More Intense
I Wanna Know What Happens
I Wanna Know How This Thing Ends

Verse 1
Could You Comprehend Aberration Which Appeases The Mind
Your Alacrity Means It Kills You Inside Diseases With Lines
Ceases The Rhymes Require Justice So Brief With Design
Increased With The Crimes To Connive Decieve And Collide
Show Deferential And Fabricate Empathy With Forsaken Lyrics
My Favoured Spirits Impeccable Lurid Mistaken You Fear It
A Maverick Lonesome Meticulous With My Work
The Nadir Of My Day Is Higher To Novices With No Spurrs
If You Appear Oblivious To My Rage A Satirical Imitation
Perusal Examinations A Rife Of Their Sanitation
A Mouth Full But I Coerce These Words Into My Song
Cumulative Explosions Occur Know That I'm Never Wrong
Show Compassion How Can You Be So Apathetic
Thats Pathetic That You Let It Digest IntoYour Credit
I Commemorate Disgression And Enhance My Pride
One Glance Inside Enervate Whilst I Dance My Cries

Hook
When It's Hard To Sleep
As The Plot As Grows More Intense
I Wanna Know What Happens
I Wanna Know How This Thing Ends

Verse 2
Now Take A Gander At Your Life Was It All Worth While
The Hypocrits No Dilligence In All First Trials
They Address The Problems Then Navigate To The Cause
Well If We Excavate This Problem We Can See Into The Jaws
Of The Devil Ready And Formed So Steady Engorged
The Soul of Each And Every Person That Led Me Off Course
That Strolled Into The Shadows And Abandoned Me There
Stranded And Scared I Perseveered So Badly Impaired
For This Cruel World With No Sagacity For This Simpleton
I Stood With Them Took A Breath And Fought Is What I Shoulda Done
I Spoke Out With So Much Humble Pain That Runs Insane
In The Brain Off The Chain To Much Evil For Him To Claim
Honestly Honesty Never Fights Off All My Woes
But I Tell The Truth And Get More Insightful As I Go
This Avarice Has Me Wondering How I Coped Before
I Found The Light Reknowned As Right Then Stop Hoping More

Aiight Much Preciated Syph

"Of The Devil Ready And Formed So Steady Engorged
The Soul of Each And Every Person That Led Me Off Course
That Strolled Into The Shadows And Abandoned Me There
Stranded And Scared I Perseveered So Badly Impaired
For This Cruel World With No Sagacity For This Simpleton
I Stood With Them Took A Breath And Fought Is What I Shoulda Done"
^that right there was on point, overall this drop was pretty straight, def doing ya thing, stay up and do you. 1

Nice Vocab Mutual/Infinite/Messaih (how many damn names you got man?) -- "Show Compassion How Can You Be So Apathetic
Thats Pathetic That You Let It Digest IntoYour Credit
I Commemorate Disgression And Enhance My Pride
One Glance Inside Enervate Whilst I Dance My Cries"

Thanks For The Feed Flex An Riggz And Riggz Those Are My Three Names And I have One More Which I Started With Witch Was GODD But I Dropped That Lolz I Also Was Mutual Hostility But I Dropped The Hostility Any How Thanks For The Feed

Ceases The Rhymes Require Justice So Brief With Design
Increased With The Crimes To Connive Decieve And Collide
Show Deferential And Fabricate Empathy With Forsaken Lyrics
My Favoured Spirits Impeccable Lurid Mistaken You Fear It
^^^^^^^^^^^^that was dope


I think the whole first verse really did well
nice vocab and very vivid lines! keep em coming!
I'm feelin' this piece!

thanks for the feed QZ