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Re: Just A Key
Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 7:07 pm
by - Mutual -
damm i liked this piece shoulda been longer but had a dope flow to it very nice bars i liked readin this didnt think i was gonna nothin against you just cant be assed feeding at the moment but when i read this i was like ohh mayne this is pretty dope my favourite bar was
i Got A Flashy Piece That Fires Bullets it'll Even Make Jason Kidd Gossip
When Tha Trig Locks it'll Pop A Shot And i'll Stop To Watch Ya Ribs Drop it
that shit was dope all of it and with a strong finish very nice piece here i applaud this
Re: Just A Key
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 2:09 am
by JDR
i'm A Veteran Pick Pocket With A Quick Ratchet That'll Spit Sockets
But There's No Need To Switch Topics My T-Macs Known To Dish Rockets
Dope punch. Feelin' the multies.
Re: Just A Key
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:56 pm
by ReFleXiOn
This drop was pretty straight, I liked the flow and the scheme u used at the end.
"i'm A Veteran Pick Pocket With A Quick Ratchet That'll Spit Sockets
But There's No Need To Switch Topics My T-Macs Known To Dish Rockets"
^I hate to re-quote but that was also my favorite line. 1
Re: Just A Key
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:00 am
by Riggz
haha, I like your sports metaphores.. I gotta join the mass on this line "i'm A Veteran Pick Pocket With A Quick Ratchet That'll Spit Sockets
But There's No Need To Switch Topics My T-Macs Known To Dish Rockets" LOL, that's just a hellova bar there Toyh.
Re: Just A Key
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 4:51 am
by complexity
Solid wording, and good punchlines. The last two bars were clearly the stand outs.
Not much more to say about it.
Enjoyable read though.
Re: Just A Key
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 5:03 am
by QwarterZ
this whole piece went together fluently
got some dope bars in here, punches were on point
and the flow was nice...well until I got to this part
Turn Bill Cosby When My Shots Hit They'll Turn You into A Jellitan Suite
you threw me off I was like jellitan SUITE?
but I get it it was supposed to be SUIT...other than that a dope piece!
KEEP WRITING!
Re: Just A Key
Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 2:49 am
by HKX
not bad 4 a short drop dawg word play is dope as always punchlines were on point 4 a quick lil key dis is ill man
-- 17 Apr 2010 10:50 --
opener was ill if u got a sick opener then ur straight
Re: Just A Key
Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 2:59 am
by FlipSide
All Of You Cats Foolish That's Why i'll Never Make Ammends With Man
i Drop Bars So Heavy They'll Snap Bones 'Til All Of Your Tendons Jam
I think i heard something similar to that..but given its a key.. still nicely put together
but the last two bars were hot... since everyone quoted it no need to...and that bill cosby line was hot too... thanks for droppin...helps a dude out