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....ok ok the beat is sumtn to bob to. i dunno if ur quality is off or its jus an effect but i really like the way the vocalz go wit the beat as well as the lyrics. i know u from a hood homeboy so use that slang and throw sum swag. u almost sound too smart for sum these niggas. ur lyrics are elevated i must say, but at the same time, i like to hear cats switch the style up every once and agin. jus my point of view. i aint knockin this at all cus its a ku concept, good lyrics and good beat. this is sumtn i would slap if i had the time to do so. yea cus i jus heard it agin, monotone is not the word im lookin for, but leanin towards. jus switch shit up and u can grab attention alot more. i dunno, jus an opinion. all in all though, i personally give this track a 8.5/10 jus cus i aint on it. hahaha. na jus fuckin. this a 10 in my book. specially cus this the first i heard from ya. keep droppin though pimpin, ill be listenin....

I appreciate the feed dunn... I just started, since 03 i did not even write so im gettin my skillz back... I feel u on the monotone shit.. I noticed it too lol. But thanks for the critic cuz imma definitely keep it in mind for when i do my next track...Im thinkin the swagg ill come back once i get more comfortable with my voice.. And as for the quality...it really is that its fucked up and i dont have a good mic... I been lookin and even posted in the right section for it but these niggz sleepin like the on tylenol pm.. so if anyone kno where i can get a cheap quality mic let me know please... And oh yea uppin

where can i get a descent mic...cuz my shit is the headphone one from k mart...n this shit sucks...thanks for the feed tho

Yeah, quality is the only thing holding you back man.

Lyrics are the strong point, flow is on point.

Delivery could be better but its solid for the type of track this is.

Overall lyrically dope, but the quality brings it down a couple levels.

7/10