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!ll Ego vs Cre@T!ve

Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 8:59 pm
by !ll Ego
5 bars
Rest is house

Re: !ll Ego vs Cre@T!ve

Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 9:45 pm
by NoVeL
Check! Look..

Clash Of The Titans V.S. Battle Of The Ego's, I'll Smash Ya Right Hand Cuz My Lyricals Is Evil, In This Battle Ego's The Beyonce Type.. Cuz My Trey Sings Songz Since I Gotta Big You Know!!

& Who Knows That I'll Murk Dis Cat, Servin' Raps/Wraps Like I Work 4 Mac, C Donald 4 Who Neva Heard Of That, Ego's Punches Will Neva Swing.. Cuz His Effects Will Only Revert 2 Jabs!!

Pay Attention

This Is Where I Kick Ya Ass, Spit Sum Crack N Blow Sum Hash, Ego You Aint Dope You Trash, N Only Time People Refer 2 Ya Notes.. Is In Back Of Global Class!!

I'm Breakin The Cycle Cuz I Hated My
Harley, Smoke !ll Sour D In My Basement Gettin Sedated 2 Marley.. You A Virgin Dawg.. Did I Ever Tell Yall Only Person Ego Dated Was Barbie?

Enough Kiddin Its No Fun Clownin You, I'm Finished Spittin Written Rounds At You, Go Satisfy Ya Ego N Have Sex Wit A Call Girl.. Cuz You Won't Ever Get A Blow.. Even If She Goes Down On You!!

Re: !ll Ego vs Cre@T!ve

Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 1:59 am
by !ll Ego
check

Re: !ll Ego vs Cre@T!ve

Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 10:08 pm
by !ll Ego
ya skill is infitesimal I blow you mind out of this world like extra terrestrials
ya wack n after this battle I'ma change your 1 and 12 record to a decimal
ya havin a fling with another fag I'll murder you my mans bringin the leather bag
it's not really fitting is it that your name consists of the one thing you will never have
ya sentimentally fendin me this evidence he's wack so I'm evidentiary powered
that the only way this faggot stretch crack is in the penitentiary showers
I smash ya voice my words so sick that if you try to spit em you throw it up like Pastor Troy
I am god bitch so obviously you get fucked in my house like a pastor boy
my raps devoid of consience i murder worthless niggas you had to push me
this is his 1st battle v me so ima smash on him now like he's virgin pussy

Re: !ll Ego vs Cre@T!ve

Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 8:04 pm
by JDR
Flow - Ego
Punches - Ego
Personals - Ego

Ego
ya havin a fling with another fag I'll murder you my mans bringin the leather bag
it's not really fitting is it that your name consists of the one thing you will never have

Pretty nice. I like the personal

Creative
Enough Kiddin Its No Fun Clownin You, I'm Finished Spittin Written Rounds At You, Go Satisfy Ya Ego N Have Sex Wit A Call Girl.. Cuz You Won't Ever Blow.. Even If She Goes Down On You!!

Decent closer.

Vote - Ego

Came harder with the punches. Had decent personals and I liked the way he set up his punches with his structure.

Re: !ll Ego vs Cre@T!ve

Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 10:09 pm
by !ll Ego
bump

Re: !ll Ego vs Cre@T!ve

Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 2:44 pm
by Riggz
Creative:

Clash Of The Titans V.S. Battle Of The Ego's, I'll Smash Ya Right Hand Cuz My Lyricals Is Evil, In This Battle Ego's The Beyonce Type.. Cuz My Trey Sings Songz Since I Gotta Big You Know!!
1.5/5 – No I don’t know… and even if I am supposed to know, how the hell does this fit in battling?

& Who Knows That I'll Murk Dis Cat, Servin' Raps/Wraps Like I Work 4 Mac, C Donald 4 Who Neva Heard Of That, Ego's Punches Will Neva Swing.. Cuz His Effects Will Only Revert 2 Jabs!!
2/5 I mean, your multies are cool.. but they make NO sense ThoughT.

Pay Attention

This Is Where I Kick Ya Ass, Spit Sum Crack N Blow Sum Hash, Ego You Aint Dope You Trash, N Only Time People Refer 2 Ya Notes.. Is In Back Of Global Class!!
1.5/5 I never took “Global Class” but I know this was a half ass attempt at a punch that didn’t make it out of elementary.

I'm Breakin The Cycle Cuz I Hated My Harley, Smoke !ll Sour D In My Basement Gettin Sedated 2 Marley.. You A Virgin Dawg.. Did I Ever Tell Yall Only Person Ego Dated Was Barbie?
2/5, I’ll give you a half point for the wordplay and meta for the cycle/harly line; however the personal sucked.

Enough Kiddin Its No Fun Clownin You, I'm Finished Spittin Written Rounds At You, Go Satisfy Ya Ego N Have Sex Wit A Call Girl.. Cuz You Won't Ever Blow.. Even If She Goes Down On You!!
2/5 A for effort. Question, did you mean he would never “get a blow”?
9/25 – Slightly below average battle verse

ILL EGO:

ya skill is infitesimal I blow you mind out of this world like extra terrestrials
ya wack n after this battle I'ma change your 1 and 12 record to a decimal
3/5 ..”to a decimal” – HA nice opener. Infinitesimal… not bad with the vocab, even though you spelled it wrong. LOL
ya havin a fling with another fag I'll murder you my mans bringin the leather bag
it's not really fitting is it that your name consists of the one thing you will never have
2.5/5 – nice personal.. though it could’ve been worded better for a higher score. Grammer check.
ya sentimentally fendin me this evidence he's wack so I'm evidentiary powered
that the only way this faggot stretch crack is in the penitentiary showers
2/5 words are rhymin’ but they ain’t sayin’ nothing.


I smash ya voice my words so sick that if you try to spit em you throw it up like Pastor Troy
I am god bitch so obviously you get fucked in my house like a pastor boy

1.5/5 “pastor troy/pastor boy”.. pretty weak/redundant… and catholic priest boys would’ve been a better simile.

my raps devoid of consience i murder worthless niggas you had to push me
this is his 1st battle v me so ima smash on him now like he's virgin pussy
2/5 Weak closer with “push me/pussy” very predictable rhyme scheme. Half a point for punch.

11/25 Average battle verse, Vote = ILLEGO

Re: !ll Ego vs Cre@T!ve

Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 4:21 pm
by NoVeL
Yeah Your Right Riggz That Was A Typo Not That Its Gonna Make A Difference But Imma Edit It Fam Thanks 4 Pointin It Out!!
0-2 Uppin

Re: !ll Ego vs Cre@T!ve

Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 3:50 pm
by MOEstradamus
dont dq him cuz cat sweep goes to ego

creative its like ur inconsistent as fuck. you beat major and didnt do half bad but then u did this??