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So I guess I miss you right now.

You left me all strung out, when my hearts stretched to the limit, it makes my love acoustic.
You used you're fingers beautifully when you played my music, I love you for it.
When you left I gathered what was left of the symphony. I can still feel you right next to me, some days...

When you're rhythm hits me it reminds me of why I beat my heart so much. Why I try so hard so much, why I just can't give in or give up so much, I want you to love me the way you used to... remember? "Till it saves us or kills us" that's what we agreed on when we opened our ribcages. Remember??

We were both so open we forgot how to fully close… I can't hold on to things to well and I sure as hell don't know how to let things go. But trust me... if you hold on for a minute and let me gather my breath. I think I have something to say that might make it easier to stay... I love you! Today and everyday...

freestyled... let me know what you think.

well i'll start by saying that was that was a
decent read,you had some nice contents within
your drop,in parts it was vivid {your first 3
lines} which for me stood out the most,all in
all it was a nice piece..

Thanks for the feed homie. Glad you enjoyed the read.

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thanks for the feed Eros. I like you're poetry too man, keep it coming.