Re: Insomnia Part 1
Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 2:24 pm
you had alotta sick lines in this.
"How come life can't come with instructions?"
"Crying is losing, smiling is winning -- and right now he looks like he won something, even though he feels like he's losing everything..."
"Someone else... Someone else was there... Someone else was there staring back at him... What? Who is this other person inside of him? Whatever it is it's alive in him// It even has the same eyes as him -- it keeps waiving hi to him -- "is he me? or maybe I am him?"//"
^ probably my favorite line of them all. I can't wait to see it finished keep up the good work man.
"How come life can't come with instructions?"
"Crying is losing, smiling is winning -- and right now he looks like he won something, even though he feels like he's losing everything..."
"Someone else... Someone else was there... Someone else was there staring back at him... What? Who is this other person inside of him? Whatever it is it's alive in him// It even has the same eyes as him -- it keeps waiving hi to him -- "is he me? or maybe I am him?"//"
^ probably my favorite line of them all. I can't wait to see it finished keep up the good work man.
