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ok 5 bars..just wanna get back to this.. default categories (punches, word/nameplay, multies, flow, personals and creativity?) please judge fair.

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werd .. check

i stun in bouts mate so best not come in my way coz this Route'll Son You, i text Astoundng Kung Fu, make you 'PAY IN THIS BAR'.. pull the trigger and 'THE ROUND's ON YOU!'
I'll Pound And Stun You, Listen read my verse, U can not harm this, coz -point- is WHAT YO BAR MISS..have niggaz doubting my rap profession coz u GETTING SO MANY NOTES FROM MY KEYS making me seem like a PIANO ARTIST
Have my guns leashed, ull be BENDING AND DIEING see my METS WILL END LIVEZ and when I pop the metal, u'll stand up to ur name n END WITH A NINE!..
(QU-IX.. IX=9)

'I need a minute to kill u' and make u B-TCHING INDEED..and talkng bout ya losses? I'll start beating u at 15.59 so its only a matter of time till u be REACHING SIXTEEN..
Checked Quixy In Linkz, This peer never made it above BASIC LINES coz his WEIGHT IS LIGHT.. nt just Iller Fact is Im Great In Rhymes.. Make yall see PSY KICK Q like TELEPATHIC PEOPLE IN WAITING LINES..
(Psychic Queue)
Done

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Wut it do Illest??








....Ahem
This a cat i SHOULD BE BEATING; funny punches ... send jabs and straight HOOK THIS WEAKLING
and wuts even funnier ... you named yourself after something you SHOULD BE SEEKING
....wut are you doing???
i'll have this WEAK GUY DROPED-IN HELL! cuz when i CREEP, PEEPS GET SHOT AS WELL!
you ain't rough on the surface .... cuz 'T P is hella soft' like THREE PLY COTTENELLE
....Werd
hmmm, maybe you should have PICKED YOUR SPOT ... cuz round here QUIX A GOD
KID YOU NOT; your around more balls than jocks but still prefer to LICK THE KOK
....Curtains close!



SORRY .... i'll deleate all unneeded text!




G'Luck

ayt thanx., please vote on all categories i mentioned in my first post..and keep it fair..up

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werd thanks for voting!

yeah whatever man..i accept any votes.. just checkng how that site works...to me quix waz nowhere near in punches or creativity and word/nameplays.. i agree that my flow waznt all that bt that waz it lol.. no hard feelings..its all good! upping 4more votes..

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HMM, and thats not swaying??? ^^^ hmmmm

i stun in bouts mate so best not come in my way coz this Route'll Son You, i text Astoundng Kung Fu, make you 'PAY IN THIS BAR'.. pull the trigger and 'THE ROUND's ON YOU!'

no^^, wordplay was not good punch did not hit

I'll Pound And Stun You, Listen read my verse, U can not harm this, coz -point- is WHAT YO BAR MISS..have niggaz doubting my rap profession coz u GETTING SO MANY NOTES FROM MY KEYS making me seem like a PIANO ARTIST

ur talking about urself in a battle, and u have never battles here before so how would he get notes from ur keys? not a good line at all...no punch

Have my guns leashed, ull be BENDING AND DIEING see my METS WILL END LIVEZ and when I pop the metal, u'll stand up to ur name n END WITH A NINE!..
(QU-IX.. IX=9)

No....this can barely be considered nameplay all u said was stand up to ur name u didnt play off it in ur line...and the way u worded the line did not sound anyway like the explanation.

'I need a minute to kill u' and make u B-TCHING INDEED..and talkng bout ya losses? I'll start beating u at 15.59 so its only a matter of time till u be REACHING SIXTEEN..

dont even get the punch at all....bar was stretched to death

Checked Quixy In Linkz, This peer never made it above BASIC LINES coz his WEIGHT IS LIGHT.. nt just Iller Fact is Im Great In Rhymes.. Make yall see PSY KICK Q like TELEPATHIC PEOPLE IN WAITING LINES..
(Psychic Queue)
Done

this was decent, wording was terrible though. this was ur only ok punch in ur whole verse...


*im not voting just showing u why u did not win this battle, ur nameplay and wordplay and punches were not hitting at all like u think they were, stop hating on the site and voters and work on ya text homey.*

pssh..its whatever lil nika..

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VOTE!!!



1-0 q

punch-q
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creativity-q



3-0
vote-q

So thats my 50th win!!


thanks


update and close please!!