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8 lines (4 Bars)

Due by tomorrow night

votes are to be thrown on

Nameplay/personals:
Metaphors:
Multis:
Wordplay:
Punches:

Thats It..if anything else you wanna vote on then throw it in there....

Checkin In an Keyin Up....

~KrAzYeYeZ~



Look....

This homosexual rockin-crowds naww he take cock n mouth like elton john
I keep it in the family damn-me its sad he call me dad cause he remember the time I felt his mom

this pricks-a-rhymer click-the-timer n det-o-nate explosion
KrAzY gone vary-the-stab n bury-this-fag leave him dead-his-fate-carosion his greed make him bleed n recieve a bloody deed serious this rap game he-own-it?? naww but open-eyes you hope-n-die bring the o's-twice I don't know-nice carode his body wit old-spice like the kid who died from de-o-dorant!!!(news story)

you wanna lose?? then reply get on ya comp..rock..do-it I'm blessed-oh-yes sendin s-o-s cause Imma stomp-ock-stupid!!!! Imma bring joy when toy-fly deploy n watch this boy-die like the six year old n a micr-o-wave this dyke-a-rave? naww but he gettin a clip-ta-gut n dick-n butt I heard he like-ta-take

resurrected poet call me shake-speare fuck this fake-queer only lines you slammin hard is layed flat n take-rear leave this chick wit no dick fuck a-beam no es-teem cause I done raped-fear!!!!

LMFAO
fuck, only just seen this.
I'll key sumthin now.

-- Fri Mar 12, 2010 4:26 pm --

Bitch please all ya punches miss, no way your making my ass fall
If you draw blood, it's my fists cut up from breakin ya glass jaw
And ya bitch aint fit for streets..Shit she should be locked away
Shes a bigger freak out in public than when they took the Whopper away
I'm gonna smash this wack trash, no way this whore's better
Fuck being out of his league, he's in the wrong sport all together!
I know you're a fag kid, on a dude's lap's where ya ass'll settle
So your asshole's as wide as the gap between our talent levels

HAHA

okk

Punches: B
Flow: Tie
Humeour: K
Content: B
Personals: K
EnjoyemntL: K
structure: B
Vote: B

mainly because dude went over the limit!


closer than i thought this would be!



return the vote!

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Yo Eyez.. the word is "structure"... go find it and implement it in your rhymes.

cat:
Punches - B
Personals - B
Flow - B
Sweep

vote = Boydy (work on complexity Boydy... your rhymes are a little too simple to match with most folks here)

work on complexity Boydy

thanks for the advice.

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Boydy won this, took punches and creativity, wordplay was there. pretty 1 sided in my opinion.

Vote-Boydy

thanks for the votes, people always saying to work on my complexity.

That'll be a KO then.