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off track

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:35 am
by Tipsy/ Tips
i dont know where 2 go or where 2 start at,
5 years with u i'll never get back,
im 24 n fully off track,
i have no idea which 1 is my path,
all i know,i gotta let go of the past,
gotta learn to stop puttin myself last,
cuz im goin nowhere, n gettin there fast.
i look in the mirror, think who is that?
dont know whos starin back,
who im lookin at,
reality is the thing that i lack.
stupid me, lit up my bridges with a match,
sparked a spliff with the next 1 in the pack,
went 2 the fridge, grabbed a juice 2 crack,
lucky im not sniffin mad lines n doin blasts,
fuck, everythin i been doin is whack,
i need someone 2 come throw me a smack,
snap me back to the thoughts of the stacks,
makin cash, have servers always fillin up my glass,
but all my hopes and ambition has passed,
societys put me in cast,
now all i wanna do is get smashed,
n i dont think no1 can handle that..


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Re: off track

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:09 am
by QwarterZ
THIS....was a improvement
very good, but not really at full potential
look forward to watchin' you progress tho' dawg....keep writing!

Re: off track

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:49 am
by Tipsy/ Tips
haha no balls here.. just a bitch expressin my shit...