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they call me tipsy, tips,
got shit 2 make u trip,
loose ur grip,
have u on a next tip,
i'm so legit..
yea i can preach,
but to take in what i speak,
thats another story,
id rather sit back n sip on my 40's

-- Wed Mar 03, 2010 3:20 pm --

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/talki ... 15891.html
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YO SON....this was wack....I ain't gon lie
I mean it MIGHT sound dope on a song
but....lengthen your lines, work on some multi's
leave the middle school rhymes peep some other peoples work
take into consideration what you see and then possibly you will exceed your own limits you underdig?
now go....shhhhh.....just go!
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Damn son I can write better and I'm just a fanboy.

But serious that was wack as hell, maybe would sound good as an intro or some shit..
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Reminds me of Malibu's Most Wanted.
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turn ur son into a daughter.. sorry bro.. but just introducin myself.. im simple n plain.. just straight say how i am..

-- Wed Mar 03, 2010 8:20 pm --

im a boxer,
luv playin soccer,
as original as an o.c chopper..
with these hazel eyez,
n lusious lips,
thick thighs,
n voluptuous hips..
what about da ass n tits??
thats da shit that makes em flip,
loose their grip,
on their knees beggin 2 give it a lick,
licky, licky,
spark da sticky icky,
pass da mickey quickly..
haha..
u just fell 4 tipsy..

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/the-p ... ml#p134112

-- Wed Mar 03, 2010 9:40 pm --

haha holla at a balla..lmfao..
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