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I'm a Go Crafty on his Face,
Nose on his forehead, all sots of Crap be outta place
then Bandage him up, n get to Slashin on his Brace,
n yes, I''m stressin n the Captains a bit en-Raged
god, I hope the Casket fits his Brain,
one leg, and one arm, n he''s lacking both his grapes
Parasytes Feasting while i Drag-him to the lake,
grab his fucking head and fucking Bash it till it brakes,
He dead!
watched dah blood spill till my Ma-Stopped me, shocking, but ma Pa-Caught me
He was like "Thank god, there won''t be any of his brain left foh dah Autopsey"
pu dah tek to his brother, and really leave a mess for the doctor
"Its probablly best not to Talk sir",
then Blast the Tech-9 leave him worse off then having Sex wid his Father
fuck em, leave him leaking from dah chopper
leave him deceased and dumped in lockers

Blah just a quick drop foh activity sake!!

ya main, thankz big dog!!

question.....what is Horo?

other then that this was dope
reminded me of that Horrorcore style people was crazy about
very nice ish keep writing my dude


watched dah blood spill till my Ma-Stopped me, shocking, but ma Pa-Caught me
He was like "Thank god, there won''t be any of his brain left foh dah Autopsey"

for some reason I LMAO at that....good visuals

this was ku. painted the pic pretty well. it felt like i was murkin right nexta ya. sounded smooth all through out. this was dope quix.

werd real talk!! much appreciated!!


LOL @ Q .. yeah man i meant Horrorcore!!

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this is a fun read....there was quality in here but it felt keyed......as it was lol...i'd like to see a well thought out horrorcoreverse from u cuz seem good at it. there's something beautiful about murdering someone with rhymes schemes and word play...
pretty simple but not very predictable so props on that.....stay up lookin out for more thought out pieces from u

I pretty much agree with the consensus so far. It was just a fun drop. The story made sense to a degree. There really isn't much to say, besides it helps diversify the scriptures section, that has taken a real serious turn lately. When I'm leaving all this feedback, it was good comedic relief, so I appreciate that.

haha word ^ thanks!!

i know im posted a bit late but

watched dah blood spill till my Ma-Stopped me, shocking, but ma Pa-Caught me
He was like "Thank god, there won''t be any of his brain left foh dah Autopsey"

that shit had me rolln
nice drop