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Honestly Haz. I don't know what the hell that topic was, I asked a few times, so I just rapped some shit.

Feed it!

Plex
Hazard

How is this suppose to start, I'll know it - when the moment sparks
so sick of artists, I've stolen carts of roman art just to throw my darts
I've been surging - about to give this game open heart
I remain searching, for the perfect soul, but the earth is cold and dark
my family is still close I can only hope we don't grow apart
I'd explode, if I was alone on a one way road like Rosa Parks
when my flow is sharp, its like an open ocean, I'm a focussed shark
the flood of emotions could take out most of Noah's Ark
sometimes I go to far, tell you I'm an athlete, when I'm a bowling star
this is just me, even accept it or leave, because I've got no PR
acting delighted, I'm back and excited, rapping like my older bars
the passion ignited, could hold a charge on a fucking solar car



Raise Ya Hands And Praise The Man,
Everyday's a Hand, Why Gamble n Smoke that Haze With Fam?
Worship What you Do cause If Them Predictions Coming True
Then Frictions Running crews The smart ones die Dumbing Few
Sniper Out who's In Running View? Stunning Clue ..
A Sound Undergrounds Humming Threw, Like a Raising Bird
Blazing Erb throwing Knives At Mason Words..
If They Wanna Sentence Till I Can Not See,They're Nazi's
With Generals Cooking Up Like Emerald In The Design Of a Gotti
Self seen as Godly,grip tight With Satan,Sniff white Awaiting
a Big Ignite They're Chasing..Should I Fear This? wheres The Facts,
Got dudes wearing Sheers with straps Saying we gunna Go in 2012 How clear is That?

this drop was pretty hot, both y'all did ya thing, although I must say I was feeling complexity's part more than hazards, the metas seemed stronger and I rocked with the flow better. Don't sell yaself short though hazard, your part was on point as well. Just not as effective as plex's IMO. Please return the feed. 1

I like the way Plex started off, like not knowin' exactly what to write about and just let it hit'em as he went along. It came out well man.

Haz often writes like that anyway, no real subject, just spittin random thoughts.. still quick with the word play and metaphores, just not sure what he's going after.

i don't know, chat box collab? I'll give this an A for effort.

Riggz wrote:I like the way Plex started off, like not knowin' exactly what to write about and just let it hit'em as he went along. It came out well man.

Haz often writes like that anyway, no real subject, just spittin random thoughts.. still quick with the word play and metaphores, just not sure what he's going after.

i don't know, chat box collab? I'll give this an A for effort.

No it obviously wasn't a chat box collab.

"I've been surging - about to give this game open heart
...
when my flow is sharp, its like an open ocean, I'm a focussed shark
the flood of emotions could take out most of Noah's Ark"

When I read those lines I had to stop and re-read them cuz it was ridiculous. I liked how Plex's verse stayed consistent with rhyming with the opening "moment sparks". I wasn't feeling the Rosa Parks line but the rest of it was dope.


I was thoroughly confused when I read Haz's verse though. In comparison, both had good multi's and the rhyme scheme was there but I'm lost about what the topic is suppose to be and I think that takes away from the effectiveness of the verse.

yeah this was pretty nice both of ya kept a good flow and it was pretty funny with no topic so plex improvised lol this was a solid piece probably preferred plex's slightly more because of the consistent flow but Haz yours was pretty good aswell