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Sequence:
When my verse's drop, it submits-a-winner, so i'll lyrically blitz-this-sinner,
Cause " Demon brings nothing to the table " since no one want's spirit's-at-dinner,
2.5/5 “No one wants spirit’s at dinner” hmmmmm.. no

My scripts-are-sicker, Kid's dreaming-if-he's-blessed, here's some seaman-to-digest,
Cause this dick rider, got " sequence in his head " like it's demon-that-is-possessed
3/5 nice, had to read it twice to get the full effect.

So stop keying-i-suggest, with my text-precision, no showing will be you're next-decision,
i'm in the next-division, so " demon get out of here " i'm the battle grounds exorcism,
3/5 another nice one

You couldn't effect-my-written, my best-spits-are-ruthless, now that's what the truth is..
Cause i just showed that " Demon's aren't untouchable" like skeptick's-are-useless,
2.5/5 forced the punch but nice multies
11/20

Demon:
Listen I'm Fresh'a, And With Writtens I'll Wreck Ya
Only Time You Seek Wins / Sequence? Is Predictin The Weatha!
3/5 Short but sweet, I liked

Chicken u Betta Grab a Shottie For Front'n, Cuz I'ma "Control+C / Se" Like im Copyin Somethin!
ull Get bodied for Stunt'n! Nobody Lovin Ya Text, Cuz Like The Greatest Blowjobs They Suck At its Best!
3/5 I gotta give you the set up.. that was nice. Punch is a little played, but the set up over powered it.

I Give A Fuck What u Rep, Cuz Ya Whole Cliques Soft
But After This Lost ? I 'Turned Off a Sir Ta Rap' Sorta Like Rick Ross!!! ( Turned Officer Ta Rap)
2/5 forced punch and word play

ill Make This Nigga Get Silent! Bitch Just Sit Quiet, This Sissy Pricks Cryin
Cuz I'm The Big Violent.. Kid With Clips Risin..have Ya "See'n" Ya Death Like A Crip Riot! (Seein / C'in)
2.5/5 again, forced it, not feelin the closer but word play was on point
10.5/20
V = Sequence by a hair

my vote goes to demon. both verses were decent but demon's flowed better n he was more creative with his disses.. hope i aint gotta break this down cause i aint trying to write no documentary..

wow good battle.
I think id have to vote like this punches demon, nameplay sequence, wordplay demon, multies demon, flow demon. I liked demons verse more his shit felt like it hit harder. His first two bars, just done it for me. Sequence ya second and third one was good to, but in my opinion not as enjoyable as demons part. I'll be looking Forward to seeing more of both of yals battles.

But i'ma give my vote to demon.

Lol Only Sequence Could Say That Cus It's His Vote Otherwise It Could Be Seen As Your Losing So Get Rid Of It lol No Offence Just Stating Facts Okay

When my verse's drop, it submits-a-winner, so i'll lyrically blitz-this-sinner,
Cause " Demon brings nothing to the table " since no one want's spirit's-at-dinner,

Not Bad Good Use Of Multies But Syllables Were off So I had To Deduct Points lol 7.5/10

My scripts-are-sicker, Kid's dreaming-if-he's-blessed, here's some seaman-to-digest,
Cause this dick rider, got " sequence in his head " like it's demon-that-is-possessed

This Was Alot Better For Flow Slightly Off At The End "That Is" Should Become "That's" lol 8/10

So stop keying-i-suggest, with my text-precision, no showing will be you're next-decision,
i'm in the next-division, so " demon get out of here " i'm the battle grounds exorcism,

Nice Punch On The Nameplay Smooth Bar 8/10 But Words Were Missing lol

You couldn't effect-my-written, my best-spits-are-ruthless, now that's what the truth is..
Cause i just showed that " Demon's aren't untouchable" like skeptick's-are-useless,

The Multies Seemed Forced But Still Not A Bad Bar 6.5/10

30/40
Total 29.5/30

When I Was Reading I Thought Damm Demon Got This But As I Tallied Up Sequence Took It lol Great Battle

Vote: Sequence

Punchlines (demon)
Nameplay (sequence, demons seek wins nameplay was creative, he just could of made it better)
Wordplay (demon, that rick ross & last bar got him this shit)
Multi's (both had it, so ima go with a tie)
Flow.., (demon, his shit was on point during the whole verse)


demon gets my vote. I explained why up there, both u niggus waz on point though.

Big Dawgs

Punchlines: Demon
Nameplay: Demon
Wordplay:Sequence
Multi's: Demon
Flow: Sequence

Overall: Demon

Punchlines- demon
Nameplay- Demon
Wordplay- Demon
Multi's- sequence
Flow- Demon


yall both had some of each categories in ya bars but demon came harder with all of them besides the multies.