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Been Another Minute

Posted: Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:02 am
by Mac
Im Speakin From The Heart Yo It's Gettin Kinda Crazy
Life Has Gotten Worse Since Brendas Got A Baby
Kids Are Havin Kids It's A Struggle To Survive
Her Mothers Out Workin With No Husband By Her Side
Her Daughters Home Alone With Discomfort In Her Eyes
Her Boyfriends Kinda Horny And Is Rubbin On Her Thighs
So She Tells Him No But He Touches Her Inside
Even Holds Her Down And Just Does It Till She Cries
A Couple Months Later She Discovers A Surprise
Shes Pregnant With His Kid So Shes Done With All His Lies
She Gets Enough Courage An Exposed It To Her Mom
Her Mother So Confused She Just Blows Up Like A Bomb
The Daughter Burst In Tears Cuz She Knows She's In A Mess
Swallows Thirty Pilles Cuz She's Copin With The Stress
An Writes Her Mom A Letter Said She Knows What She Diserves
An Shes Sorry For The Death But It's Lonely On This Earth

Re: Been Another Minute

Posted: Thu Feb 11, 2010 3:45 am
by ~Symbolikull~
U SUCK FAGGET!!!!! nah this shit is dope for realls man. i liked the whole piece, nice story very well written u lil bitch!!! flowd great, great imagery, word up to VI!!!!

time to run shit homie muahahahahahaha

Re: Been Another Minute

Posted: Thu Feb 11, 2010 10:22 pm
by Mac
Lmao, No Doubt!!

Re: Been Another Minute

Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 3:31 am
by Quix
meh, i liked it ... nothing amazing tho!!


She Gets Enough Courage An Exposed It To Her Mom
Her Mother So Confused She Just Blows Up Like A Bomb
The Daughter Burst In Tears Cuz She Knows She's In A Mess
Swallows Thirty Pilles Cuz She's Copin With The Stress
An Writes Her Mom A Letter Said She Knows What She Diserves
An Shes Sorry For The Death But It's Lonely On This Earth


liked this ^

Re: Been Another Minute

Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 7:02 am
by Lawgix
Quix wrote:meh, i liked it ... nothing amazing tho!!


She Gets Enough Courage An Exposed It To Her Mom
Her Mother So Confused She Just Blows Up Like A Bomb
The Daughter Burst In Tears Cuz She Knows She's In A Mess
Swallows Thirty Pilles Cuz She's Copin With The Stress
An Writes Her Mom A Letter Said She Knows What She Diserves
An Shes Sorry For The Death But It's Lonely On This Earth


liked this ^
nothin sounds amazing to you but ur own shit haha.... newayz this shit was good... sounds DOPE on audio... workin on gettin it there but had some push backs so when i hit the studio tomorrow i'll get it done... n post it on IL... but good shit man glad to see u back on Illest fam!!!!

Re: Been Another Minute

Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 7:42 am
by Mac
Yeah Well You Need To Hurry An Drop Your Verse!!!! Shit's Fire.