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Due In 72 Hrs, Both Check In b4 Dropping.

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Break down fav bars and give categories.

good luck fam gonna be a sick battle!

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dog,
i'm good for the game and making Hip hop grow, allways a tip top flow when mah shit drops bro!
while reading your shit got me 'Rolling on the floor laughing' like Chistopher reeves at chris Rock shows

Ready ... for the Illest lecture, up your incoherient keys and your abizzmal record!
cuz in this battle, your gettin 'rejected from from your first line' like Collge submittal letters

No body feeling this kid ... cuz Dosia on mute only time yoh Songz incredible
so lets settle this 'posia' ... I'm a put dah 'metal tah dosia' like bongs wid metal bowlz

Its Quix, I'm Bossing D! this your Retirement, your last battlle?? yup, very possibly
i'm a die of laughter, cuz olny time 'Y's a Factor' is Trigonometry


Quix hotter than Spanish titties; feed yung dah gun and have him vanish quickly
bandaged, strically left in a 'state of mizzery' like Kansas City

Good Luck Family!!

Quix
i'm good for the game and making Hip hop grow, allways a tip top flow when mah shit drops bro!
while reading your shit got me 'Rolling on the floor laughing' like handicaps at chris Rock shows
3/5 Rolling/handicaps played but you flipped it nicely.

Ready ... for the Illest lecture, up your incoherient keys and your abizzmal record!
cuz in this battle, your gettin 'rejected from from your first line' like Collge submittal letters
3/5 your spelling is “abizzmal” LOL! College submittal letters was original

No body feeling this kid ... cuz Dosia on mute only time yoh Songz incredible
so lets settle this 'posia' ... I'm a put dah 'metal tah dosia' like bongs wid metal bowlz
2.5/5 The punch just wasn’t there, maybe bongs “to” metal bowls, but even then its forced. Rhymed well.

Its Quix, I'm Bossing D! this your Retirement, your last battlle?? yup, very possibly
i'm a die of laughter, cuz olny time 'Y's a Factor' is Trigonometry
2.5/5 weak set up and punch “I’m a die of laughter” … think you could’ve gone else where with rhyming “factor”

Quix hotter than Spanish titties; feed yung dah gun and have him vanish quickly
bandaged, strically left in a 'state of mizzery' like Kansas City
3/5 Missouri for Misery LOL! Interesting word play there Quix but nothing outstanding about the punch itself.

Dosia
This niggas weak as fuck..never could throw a heavy blow...!
And all his so called girls..say they dont "need a q" there ready to go...!!!
2.5/5 Wow Dosia, I thought you were really going to hit’em with a good punch after that setup, but it barely nicked him.

Nice sig! but u aint throned yet...how he the champ, when he's not a known threat...?!
Cuz quix you'll never "reign n text"....unless u get ur phone wet..!!!
3.5/ 5 nice setup, punch and word play.

U aint spraying tools...and u honestly dont get pussy, im just saying fool...
That girls never wanna see "q balls".........Till they playing pool...!!!
3.5/5 LOL!

Uve got no wordplay, structure, and basic rhymes...this a done fight...!
Thinks his lines sick, but only complexity we see.....runs the site...!!!
3/5 nice set up for the punch

Even his momma loves 'dosia'...she want my kids, but she a hoe'ing skeez...!
She said "plant ur seed"......and when i didn't this bitch tried growing weed...!!!
2.5/5 choppy flow, sounded like an MTV joke.. not really a battle punch.

Quix - 14/25
Dosia - 15/25

I figured you guys would go easy on each other being in the same crew, cause I’ve seen both of you guys murder cats, and this was more like a misdemeanor. Dosia had one or two good lines over Quix that took it for him. Other than that it was a close battle. Wish it was a little more entertaining.

hmmm...Ok!


1-0 Dosia i suppose

1-1 uppin for votes

Imma go for Dosia on this one.

thanks man, but can u explain before we accept that vote...

Im not to much into reading rhyme, but his rhyme seemed simple.. i cant get no flow or anything except how i read it and i could flow and read yours alot more easier then i could quix... lyrical you both did awesome.. but i stick with Dosia on this one

Punchlines - Quix. more original.. hit harder.. i did like the playing pool line tho D.
Nameplays - Dosia
Multi's - Quix.. dosia some of your multies were off. like on barz one n 4
Flow -tie.
Enjoyment - Quix..


+1 quix

umm, 2-2 i guess if you count Disciples! lol


uppin for moh votes

i'm good for the game and making Hip hop grow, allways a tip top flow when mah shit drops bro!
while reading your shit got me 'Rolling on the floor laughing' like Chistopher reeves at chris Rock shows

ROFL, very creative.

Nice sig! but u aint throned yet...how he the champ, when he's not a known threat...?!
Cuz quix you'll never "reign n text"....unless u get ur phone wet..!!!

LOL that was nice!


Punches quix
flow yung
multies quix
personals none
wordplay quix
nameplay quix
vote quix

Quix bars just seemed more creative. Young did good to, but i just get the feeling he must of typed his verse quick for this battle. His last two bars was not effective.

soo 3-2 Quix


Bump!