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deeper and deeper you slide oh so deep
you my dirty lil secert i aint tryna keep


Mhmmm i Like the way That Sounds Lmao

your words hit deep in my soul
and after we finshed i got that after glow
you switch up on me and im like im bout to blow
cant get enough so im feenin for that aftershow

I'm feeling this ..


i can feel you vibin thru me when you aint around
going whereever you take me cause i wanna be down
you the first one i turn to when i wanna ooh ahh sound
thought i was stronger until you knocked me on the ground


Word LoL Reminding Me Of That Neyo/Keri Hilson Song.


this is my ode to you cause you the only one who stays true
ima ride or die for you cause you my boo
hip hop i think i could die for you.....

Aiight good Closer, Die for Me instead i Like How U Talk Dirty lmfao.


Anyways. Rhyme scheme wise This was simple, u Had one rhyming word basically at the end of each line, But the thing is.. U Painted a Picture, u Grabbed Me with a Vibe... a Sexy/ Seducing vibe ..
i Think you can write n u got A lot of Potential, Keep dropping n Soon Enough ur gunna start growing in different directions.

Anyways Good shit in my Opinion

Stay Up N Keep Dropping