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-- Sat Feb 06, 2010 11:37 am --

this is my Indoctrination....spittin nothing but Lyrical Annihilation


the Duck drink goose and get Reckloose when i WRECK YOU~the Teck will Inject you with Shots that are DREADFUL~so fast ya Bled Blue and Ended up dead before ya Head MOVED/my Text so Disrespectful when Red Through~just the Taper my Lyrics VAPOR~inspires Stacks of PAPER~flow so Hot it Sparks and Shocks like TASERS~i'm a Star that will run Trek over HATERS~Text kills but for now i got the Rhymes set to Stun~like PHASERS/i'm Old school fuck the Next Generation~and DATA~so Sick my flow cause Vomitin~my words So Astounishin~they'll Destroy ya Planet like RAMULANS/against you my TALENT is WASTED~ya so BASIC~they get Travolta to Handle ya CASES/i gave ya more WARNINGS than come on packs in cigarette CARTONS~ya couldn't FACE the CHARGES~if ya front line was comprised of SPARTANS/ get ya SPOUSE for a BARGAIN~locate the TARGET than BOMBARD it~ Missles TORCH ya HOUSE and SCORCH your CARCASS~leave you and ya DARLING~DEARLY DEPARTED/ i got 2 THANGS that can get NO STAINS~ pointing at ya DOME they can BLOW~at anytime like PROPANE~it's like i THROW FLAMES~ the way these FAGS get EJECTED/dosia a poser better off SLASHIN ya own WRISTS~before my flow gets INJECTED~ya crew bounced cuz my verse is so INFECTIOUS~ya LEFT 4 DEAD~decomposed like the INFECTED~ya FLESH gets STRETCHED and SHREDDED/

eeeeesh. guess we'll chek out wat dosia finna do. damn.

ok ok. here we go.


gizmo: wtf dawg? its a battle homie. thas all i gotta say. you said dosias name like......once. and it seemed like u just replaced the original wit his name. wasnt really feelin it.


dosia: could of came waaaaaaay harder. it seemed like you came down a level to battle this cat. pretty disappointed. but still, the puches you DID throw, hit harder than any of ducks.


fav line:

duck: homie ur shit was jus a big mess. kinda like all mine. so i really aint tryin to go through all that. i read it once and that was enough.

dosia: haha. when ur kids cryin in the tub....use a rubber duck. stupit. haha


a through z, all cats go to dosia.


vote: dosier

Loon E out.............

Co sign with loon... I won't even try to break this down..
Gizmo get structure and actually "learn" how to battle.

vote = Dosia.

Chill with the lame battles Dosia, they just wastin' space man. Plus it brings your writings down a level when you half ass it just to get the win. You better than that.

yo im just battling people i havent battled yet...

2-0 upsy

thanks for votes

and i cosign wit riggz

lmao at loon cat sweep for dosia yo duck you need to check out other battles man check how other ppl do it so you know how to set it up bro keep tryn tho cuz if you give up your never make it better

vote homey^^

i did

cat sweep for dosia

i guess i coulda pointed it out more tho but dosia gets my vote

oh ight thanks...

3-0 KO

can a mod close and update this..

good battle gizmo