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hey folks lend me your ear.
im sick like an infected ear.

haha im messin, here we go...

from the top lyricists, nobody want it with slick/
cant hurt me, life birthed me, ima son of a bitch/
i get high off my tracks like im jumpin a fence/
...we rock reeboks, and i'm runnin this shit/

tired yet? i kill vets like a government pig/
i'm not only touchin you, but im touchin ya kids/
i need... no big words to surpass your skill/
i keep... a big hearse to relax my kill/

16 bars a misdemeanor for slick and o.n.e./ (my krew)
yo i got this joint poppin like a broken knee/
but im sick of this club, same fade, same sofa/
i play hova...it's bumpin out my range rova/

now i got two bitches and i just wanna stab em/
i toss em in the back of the trunk and start laughin/
...now they wont fit so i cut off the baby fat/
used to call me slick, but now im slick the maniac/

this is my first 16 on this site. i think i been rappin for a year now...feedback?

and when i do "..."; thats a pause.

not bad not bad at all, but honestly you coulda came harder! keep at it n you'll see what I mean. try to stay away from topics that are played

ay thanks for peepin it, but nah i know what you mean, id rather rap about one subject but this is just for people to get used to me here, feel me?

haha. shits dope dawg. i liked the way errything flowed. i could def hear that on the mic. ku shit for a lil breakout session. keep em comin dawg. good read homie

iight thanks, it was just a lil somethin i came up with. good lookin tho.