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but da track is hott

ok ok. imma b straight up and down. shit was ill. i liked the picture u painted. real clear. vocal quality wasnt sensational but u still got the point across real well. i concur wit toyh, i wasnt too big on the punch ins. i think maybe if you threw a lil bit more emotion, the shit would be straight as fuck. overall though, ku joint. at times u fell off i think, but rebounded ku. like i said, i think this track is hot. better than the other shit ive heard from yall. 8/10 jus cus i think u could of came a lil tougher. dope dope tho



Loon E out..........

thanks u i respect dat

Great story, beat is ight, Like Loon E Lou said, Need more emotion, but for the way you delivered it the ad-lips and all needed to be there.. Now if you sung it with emotion you would want to let some of the ad-lips go.. You got strong lyrics man.. You can tell a story real well.. Overall Not Bad..
~~Deciple~~

thanks my nigga