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who style you lifted jack must be sniffing crack
ya flow like ya out of presents, ya have no gift to rap(wrap)
bout ta rip ya tracks ya rhymes lies im clappin ya
yungD hot!! that will be like not finding flies in africa
pops didnt promise visits now ya gotta find an honest livin
fuck rap... sell peaches out da back of ya honda civic
i bet ya mom is livid cause this queer forcing bootie flows
fag u never get da pic even if ya work at sears portrait studios

nice drop dosia..

votes please..

Category breakdown...

Flow:deville
The Rest:Young Dosia

Vote Young Dosia

Deville, don't make up personals that aren't true. You flowed well, but that's about it. Nothing in your verse was hard or battle worthy, kind of corney actually. Read through some scripts, find your niche in battling. All of us gotta do it.

Dosia... easy win with the punches, even though the first line didn't seem to be directed at deville and the other 3 you keyed to win the battle.

You know what you doin lol

deville you had a very clean verse and the closers to your bars were entertaining but they were "battle material" you wanna get in on ya opponent and personal, you feel me? you sound more like an audio rapper.

yo dos, lemme say dhis dhat scarf line was HARD! nice and original. nice nameplay in ya 3rd bar it was a given due to his name and your closer was clean cut and hard hitting.

vote-dosiaa

3-0 KO

thanks for voting and the feedback yall...

thanks for the feedback ya'll im just used to the myspace text where you can go off of pics n shit. ya know actually have something there to go off of.anyway nice battle Dosia.

no doubt good battle deville