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this al be a quick 8 bar battle

house rules

best out of five votes wins

blind post

due by tonight

good luck

aight here it is enjoy.

don't ask if I smell ya, cuz-pussy-al-be-the-aroma, Nigga please you a bitch which-be-the-reason-im-on-ya/
I-guarantee,-the shit that I spit al put-E-in-a-coma, cuz I gotta scratchy throat n I spit-sick-like-phenomena/
don't make me give you a-shoot-like-a-doctor/
Pellets al heat ya stomach-up-like-hot-lasagna/
You think your terrifying…you-are-not-a-monsta'
It aint a problem I cant solve with a-roc-ket-launcha/
Partna, Your committing career suicide/
taking me lightly, each battle should-be-con-sider-ed-do-or-die,
Your sweet like-cookies-n-pies
and guy….im hard like con-crete-slabs-be/
With punches n flow, n you throw meaning-less-multis-at-me?/
Precise, I know-he's-happy,
that its you im chopping to the size-of-gold-fish-snack-meat/
I know your face looks like you-wanna-attack-me/
But your gun shoots blanks like your-starting-a-track-meet/
How much-pain-could-that-be? Ram-bo?/
You pull ya trigger n a flag comes out the bar-rel/
in big bub-ble letters,-talking-about-ka-blam-o/
So in a lyri-cal or gun battle-first-invest-in-am-mo/ -Jusick!

i was told it'd be funny if i won without trying..lets see how much comedy comes out of this

i dont need-the-luck-in-seminars, like a rappin alcoholic i'll leave-ya-fucked-in-7-bars/
now the session-starts with weapon-scars to put text-in-charge of the second-part.../
just testin-charts n realized sex-n-cars go together like decks-n-darts/
ur lyrics r like a shitty drawing as if u sketch-n-fart, so when i trampled ya rhymes i guess i stepped-in-art/

i'm spittin-artistic by splittin-statistics and committin-a-bliss-switch/
n start gettin-ballistic from hittin-this-misfit, so don't get ya shit-in-a-twist-bitch/

retreat is jusick's-resort, u can't mock this skill.. my style's too-sick-to-sport/
all ur music's-distort, so i'll kick u in the ear and give u acoustic-support/

u'll never whoop-me-in-a-fight, ur just a rookie-on-the-site/
ur lyrics only get worse every second like Whoopi-in-the-light/

im droppin a blind post like my vision's-impaired, but ur missin-the-flare/
keep-ur-fist-in-the-air so i can leave-ur-wrist-in-a-tear, cuz wat's worst than gettin dissed-in-a-chair/

ur cyphers r plain garbage, y dont u re-try-ya-text-again/
tom said not to be racist, but how's it feel to get beat-by-a-mexican..

Couldnt even force my self toe read jusicks verse....

Flow - Ekoms
Multis - Ekoms
Punchlines - Ekoms
Vocab - Ekoms
Personal - Ekoms
Entertainment - Ekoms
Similies/metaphors - Jusick

Uh overall - Ekoms

Ekoms 1, Jusick 0

Flow - Ekoms
Multis - Ekoms
Punchlines - Ekoms
Vocab - Ekoms
Personal - Ekoms
Entertainment - Ekoms
metaphors - Jusick

overall - Ekoms

I guarantee the shit that I spit al put E in a coma,

Biting lines, isn't allowed. Just to let you know. I'll vote when i get back

I guarantee the shit that I spit al put E in a coma,

Lol that line did look familiar... anyway thats 2 - 0 should dq people for biting

hold up a fucking minute...now if your gonna ride his dick and give him votes thats one thing....but when you go as far as saying im biting thats a whole different level. fuck whoever said i was biting and whoever else believes that i was biting. first of all i dont know shit about what was been said about this man besides what i said to him in our battle, so there is no way i bit off any of you cock suckas on this site. bitch please. next vote please. thats all

omg god are yall serious...he had no punches all filers. and - - - - shit like that.
ok if it takes that to make you understand a verse then so be it.
thats what i'll do. damn. thats all yall had to say. you cant read unless this - - - is between shit that should rhyme.lol WOW

Calm down. The e-koma line was actually from THE professor. and was decently original. So I doubt you just came up with it too.

Second. Only two people have voted and its too five. And 90 percent of the people on this site want Ekoms to lose, to take a blow to his ego.

Third. Battles aren't all about Multis obviously. So don't even bother mention that.
Its just one aspect.

Fourth: its obvious you had more punchlines. but its also how effective.

Fifth. Lets just get some votes in. I hope I cleared up a few issues.

lol i really doubt he bit tho.. it did sound familiar but it wasn't e coma.. he said put e in a coma.. a bit different.. all he did was mention me in a coma.. n e ways 2-0 uppin

no i didnt bite thats why you doubt it

yea.. that's kinda wat i said

jusick I was trying my best to try my best to make you win more categories but since you cried about it now I would look just stupid if I vote for you wouldnt I? anyways.

Jusick
I dont like the way you fill your lines with "Partna" "And guy", dunno about everyone else I just dont like it , you could fill it with something more usefull.

"You think your terrifying…you-are-not-a-monsta' "
This line just sounds really wrong.
"in big bub-ble letters,-talking-about-ka-blam-o/ "
who the double fuck is kablamo?
"Your sweet like-cookies-n-pies "
To me it sounds really gay. I would never include cookies pies muffins candy or all that sissy shit in a battle verse. plus ekoms is gay and thats considered a compliment to him.
"It aint a problem I cant solve with a-roc-ket-launcha/"
You dont have a rocket launcher , over exxageration. Its not even a meta or similey.
"Precise, I know-he's-happy,"
Im happy too I dont see the point of this line.
"I know your face looks like you-wanna-attack-me/"
Was that a similie? To me it looks like a forced rhyme.
"Last edited by jusick on Wed Sep 13, 2006 7:39 pm; edited 2 times in total"
What's everyone going to think when they look at this?
"al"
I dont know about everyone else but this really confused the fuck outta me.
"should-be-con-sider-ed-do-or-die"
Ekoms put dashes between words not every 2 letters. I can hardly read your verse now. When someone adds dashes between a couple of words like ekoms is doing , to me , it means that while reading his verse you should connect those words and read them a bit faster because they form a rhyme with somethin else equivalent blah blah blah figure it out.



I liked this bar
"and guy….im hard like con-crete-slabs-be/
With punches n flow, n you throw meaning-less-multis-at-me?/"

See you cant call me a dickrider now cuz i gave you a line by line explanation which ive never ever done so I hope it was usefull good luck have fun.
incase you havent figured it out my votes to ekoms.even though as complexity said i would just wish i could vote for you to make him loose , but you had to cry about it you just had to , sorry.
(any other lines i didnt comment on I just didnt understand or theyre like just .. i dont wanna fuckin comment on them ok bye)

lol ok .. 3-0 ..u said best out of "5 votes"..leaves only 2 more votes so that's automatically my win.. good battle i guess