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here's the thread

check, due in 4 hour's right.

-- Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:39 pm --

this kid's known to flow-lamer, i'm always focused like a pro-gamer,
it's a " lyrical decapitation " , cause who's gonna win's a no-brainer,
he rips-scripts-until, sequence ripped spits-from-deville with no skill,
i do it for a cheap thrill, that will have ya more fucked then chicks-from-brazil,
have you going backwards and forwards, i rhyme with tactic's-and-forces,
better be cautious, cause in the game you're falling off like spastics-on-horses,
the lyric's i rap-with-are-flawless, kid's got no nice-luck-if-ya-choke!,
i'll slice-rump-of-this-bloke, the game you claim to spit, then the dice-stuck-in-ya-throat

you anit nice wif it

someone smak this fuck, aint got no rappers luck
my shots like jokes leave ya dome cracking up

why ya acting tuff, u dont cap n blast u been a joke
when i fire shots there be aftermath when he enter scopes

u win a win, no hope for words droppin lines of weak shit
and you 'd have a doper verse if u were rhymin speechless

if cats signed ya people they will need a spellin n speak
ya game like baby talk learn ta develop your speech

who tellin dis geek he got nice rhymes i'll roast dis hater
couldnt buy a deal bein da priceline negotiator

do us both a favor stop rappin u'll never afford ya rent
faggot ima leave ya live in ruins just like port-a-prince

Flow: Sequence
Punches: Sequence (even tho Dosia used that fall off line with horses on me)
Multies: Sequence
Personals: Deville (seemed like he was more on the attack)
Creativity: Deville (Sequence seemed pre-written)
Entertaining: Sequence (Sequence's appears to have put more thought into his punches. Not sure if it's pre-written or not, but I give him the benefit of the doubt)

Vote - Sequence

thanks for the honesty guys. these are my 1st battles in months. still trynna shake da rust off.

after reading this again. this was kind of whack on my part at least. i dont think no one else gonna vote on this so mod if ya please just go head n close this out

punches-seq
personals-tie
nameplay-tie
wordplay-seq
flow-deville
enjoyment-seq
multies-seq

Vote-Sequence

Punches: Seq
Wordplay: Sequ
Multies: Seq
ENjoyment: Seq
Nameplay: Seq
Enjoyment: Seq

Vote Seq... clean sweep. That port a prince line was a terrible way to end your verse deville.