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Due: 2/5/10

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*Young Dosia Has Been Pretty Much Dominant Lets See If Loon E Lou Can Pose A Threat Or Better Yet Stop His Streak*

hahaha. fuuuuuuuck it

Check...

Just seen this, My internet was shut off for a bit...but im back so will drop by the 5th

g/l Loon

aight fuck it. lets see if this a lil improvement


watch me put this dosia underground where it belongs.
cus the only time he's in a hit, is wen i pak him in a bong.

his game is all wrong and played out like his avatar.
im right down the freeway dawg. come see me if u "so hard"

ya name says it all. we should call him young bammer.
cus your weak and past ur peak. ill stop ya flow like dams in creeks.

mr "dosier". yomommaspimp's your ONLY promoter.
your lucky if u win. but either way, we'll meet again.


haha. yea. hope i showed improvement on this text shit.



fuck i jus noticed this is helllla short.
i dunno how yall wanna do it but lemme kno so we can situate this. my bad

all good homey...idk rules say 14 lines so 7 bars...but i hope they can let this slide for the first round so ill just match ya bars right now i was just keying it up



all good homey...idk rules say 14 lines so 7 bars...but i hope they can let this slide for the first round so ill just match ya bars right now i was just keying it up

all good dawg. lemme kno if yall need more or w/e. still gettn used to the text. not an excuse tho

Also with votes...lets get categories and a fav line from each plz

Loon E Lou Came
But Dosia Came Harder


Cat Sweep:YD

Thanks Family Can we get a fav line or something too lol...

1-0 ups

Punches: Dosia
Flow: Dosia
wordplay: dosia
vote: Dosia



cosign wut killah said pretty much!!! ^^^^ just think Loony could come MUUCH better if he put just a bit of effort into it. I can tell yah shit is mad rushed fam!


uppin

Flow: Dosia
Punches: Dosia
Metaphors: Dosia
Creativity: Dosia
Entertainment: Dosia
Personals: Tie

Fav Line Dosia
"Plus I'll Strap Down Loon E, People...Like A Mental Institute...!!!"

Fav Line Loon E
"Cus the only time he's in a hit, is wen i pak him in a bong."

Loon E I heard your audios and their pretty dope man, but text is a whole nother story. But I see that you've been dropping a lot of text's lately and I respect that and you'll get better in no time, but Dosia came harder than you. Dosia your verse wasn't amazing but it was a solid battle verse and a couple of your bars had me rolling man good shiz.

My vote: Dosia

Thanks For Voting Yalls...

Appreciate The Feedback Young K...

3-0 KO...Can U Update This And Record Killah


Good Battle Loon E

Fav Lines:
Young Dosia
Did He Doubt My Men...? Emakulate Metaphores Runs This, You Out A Win...!
Cuz All Ya Drops Have Bored/Board Members Like A City Councilman...!!!

Loon E Lou
watch me put this dosia underground where it belongs.
cus the only time he's in a hit, is wen i pak him in a bong.

-Closed n Updated-