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BL#25 Sirvs U Write vs Quix
Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 9:59 am
by K KiLLaH
16 Lines
Due: 2/5/10
House Cats & Voting Rules
*The Veteran Quix Takes On The Unknown Newcomer Lets Get It*
Re: BL#25 Sirvs U Write vs Quix
Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:45 am
by SirV's U Write
LoL check, Guess we wont need that regular battle g'Luck fam ..
Re: BL#25 Sirvs U Write vs Quix
Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 1:16 am
by Quix
check
aigh main, G'luck
keyed this shit up, prolly won't be around long enough to write anything in the next couple days
listen...
I bully most and out muscle all; either in a battle or a Tussle .. Brawl!
you in trouble dog, cuz i'm about tah 'fuck up SirV' worse than Double faults
we can sense the tension and see dah stress Quix a champ, believed the best!
a beast wid Text, while the only thing saying 'Go Write' is his G.P.S
ok gunnin this newb, or sonnin this dude ... sorry but its a simple thing
leave him crippled when i put the 'metal to his chest' like nipple Ringz
cake walk, staright bummer dude; cuz i'm a pop his top off like mah summer coup
son this newb, cuz we know 'Serv-is shit' like what plumbers do (plumbers more or less SERVICE SHIT)
i'm a kill this chump and won't have tah shoot-dah wesson, improve yah text and
Q's dah best man, while your in a 'class below' like scuba lessons
i'm a attack his brain snap his legs ... main, this fuckin crackers lame
i'll muder and 'embarass you worse' than i did to both of Hazzardz names (Illest's fakest memeber)
why you try and get involved wid a vet? ... well mah knife pokes Stalkers
he'd even suck balls for respect, but will only 'fall on the net' like tightrope walkers
Re: BL#25 Sirvs U Write vs Quix
Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 2:29 pm
by SirV's U Write
sorry Im Late
Fuck A Knife This Kid Gets the axe, Skills He lacks
This Cheap Fuck! you wont see Q Tip With out ear Wax
Like Nicole Richie's Body type Ur chances of winnin are slim
And Dude In Charge? Not Q, He aint the Boss he Jus Lose to Him
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/the-b ... 15495.html
This Aint Lion King, But will leave witta scar! Im better by far
How Many Burned this dude!Cuz Q Been Smoked before like Commie Cigars
Fuck Q The Kid Jus Irk me, This Kid aint even a emcee
So I'll Leave You ClueLess and Dead Like Brittany Murphy
Dude You Are Not raw, So Watch me get my hands On Ya
Get Hit By My LeftWhich Made You Stupid like Byron Wit head trauma
I say fuck this Dude he a Biter, And My Lyrics Hit Harder
I fathered Your Style! so watch me get Bison Like street figther
Your whole career seem stalled, I should be appalled
And Dude cant Hoop! Cuz If Q Ball He must be Bald
Your Proof you cant get anything from nothing
And Like Your Balls, You Got Skills? Am I Missing something
Re: BL#25 Sirvs U Write vs Quix
Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:04 am
by Mass Effex
Flow-SirV
Punches-Quix
NamePlay-Quix
WordPlay-Quix
Enjoyment-Quix
Vote-Quix
Return the favor.
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/mass- ... 15535.html
Re: BL#25 Sirvs U Write vs Quix
Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 3:56 am
by Absolute
Sirv...only your first two bars are worth mentioning. You started off good, then its like you stopped trying. "Special selection from my pad".. just because it rhymes doesn't mean it fits. YOU need to dig deeper. The potential is there. With that being said, Quix overall I liked the creativity in your verse, though you too had lax moments. Niggas need to hit hard every bar. You cant take a play off. BUt your verse hit harder by far, and with the exception of Sirv's first two bars, this was one sided.
QUIX GMV.
Re: BL#25 Sirvs U Write vs Quix
Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 8:04 am
by YungDosia
FAV LINES FROM QUIX...
we can sense the tension and see dah stress Quix a champ, believed the best!
a beast wid Text, while the only thing saying 'Go Write' is his G.P.S
lol nice nameplay! dope punch!^^
i'm a kill this chump and won't have tah shoot-dah wesson, improve yah text and
Q's dah best man, while your in a 'class below' like scuba lessons
hahahahaha! good wordplay and punch homey^^
FAV LINES FROM SIRV...
Dude You Are Not raw, So Watch me get my hands On Ya
Get Hit By My LeftWhich Made You Stupid like Byron Wit head trauma
had potential to be pretty sick! but wording was off...still good wordplay and punch
CATEGORIES
PUNCHES-QUIX
PERSONALS-QUIX
FLOW-SIRV
MULTIES-QUIX
WORDPLAY-QUIX
NAMEPLAY-QUIX
VOTE-QUIX
Re: BL#25 Sirvs U Write vs Quix
Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 8:33 am
by Quix
so thats 3-0 update and close please!