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i hope this is the right thread to open up this battle. well im gonna repost my drop here. just get to it when u can Quix. for a min i actually thought u were called rap king, didnt see ur actual name at 1st..


dude goofy as fuck, are u stupid or what, dude im bout
to slaughter you
my barz sick, he da type to get his car fixed, using
autotune
its best u pause your drop, someone call the cops!! bout
to be a murder scene
ya barz not hot wit flames, n i bet ya got ya name, for baggin da most a burger king,
leave em wit no chance to fight like a cancelled flight
strait grounding this chump
my barz are cold, u always keep a garbage flow, that explain why u down in da dumps
think this lame can injure me, u bout as hard as jamie
kennedy, bout to rip this faker
im flaming enemies, and im bout to rap(wrap)king like
some christmas paper
dude u hopeless n whack, u must be smokin some crack, or someone tainted ya vision
i wouldnt focus on rap, u couldnt brush my barz if u painted a prison
ima strait torch this fella while i keep a calm head
its murder. dont need a fortune teller, just to have my palms read(red)

k look, your words don't match, multies are faulty and your verse is trash
your like armless Elfs at Christmas .... the fuckin worse to rap (wrap)

they ain't screamin your name they asked for me your Past his peek
in fact your weak; so i'm a have 'Devil vanish from site' like Catholic priests

on the mic ya'll know that Quix is gold; the type tah have you quit your goals
you've prolly bit or stole, cuz those 'bars are more pussy' than a stripper pole

i'm ending his Kokky dreams, red dots to ur forhead when the shotty speaks
cuz in a fight wid blades .... i'll be quick to 'jersey Devil' like Newarks hockey team (Newark ... New Jersey Devils)

if you thought i was done shooting .. .wrong! cuz dah heat will desend again
plus if we're talking about who's dieing?? then its 'Devils night' like D12 and Eminem



aigh, vote up fellaz !

eeeeeh. that was bad...

Punches:quix
Multis:Quix
Structure:Quix
Flow:Quix
Name/wordplay:Quix
Personals:Quix

Pretty much a clean sweep. Devil ur flow is all choppy, u pause too much n switch direction. ur structre is bad also which adds to the choppy flow. felt like u were juss tossin iish in there to be honest. with some help u could be good thoe fa real. im here to help if u feel u need it.*these aint hate remarks just pointers on how u might wanna elevate*

Quix GMV. ---187

thats the same structure i been using for 4 yrs.. but its all good.. nice drop quix

mmmmm. damn. got quix on this one. hard to catch the flow deville.
a through z, i give to quix. deville i think ya shit might sound better on mic. i dunno.
let me know if yall need any explainin.


vote: QUIX

Punchz - Q
Flow - Q
Multies - Q
Nameplay - Q
W/p - None
creativity - Tie


vote - q ( i enjoyed both but q is on another level props fellas, call me out love to battle either one of you )