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lol...
dude this is DISS!XD

^opener^ was basic tho i didnt like it

but

Claims To Have Strange Sex Fetishes Tha Kid Says He'll Smash On Site
Even With Trainin Wheels it's A Wonder How He Never Crashed His Bike
Quick As A Flash Of Light i'll Smash Tha Kike 'Til it Seems Like A Massive Fight
i'll Even Slash His Wife And Leave With A Blank Stare Like illiterates Asked To Write

this was ok

BUT

heck Tha Chill French Maid Dresses? He's Even into Wearin Skirts
Sounds Like Sexual Frustration His Bitch Never Even Gave This Square A Jerk
i'll Be Quick To Floor Him But This is illest So i'll Air Him First
Gay Bashins illegal Though So He's A Faggot i Wouldn't Dare To Hurt

LMAO this keep laughing

and closing was really GOOD

imo structure could be better
but lookin on this like on DISS...well it is XD

LFAO, I won't go into breakin this down cause it's basically a parody "Skillz" type diss towards Titan that was funny as hell. Basically because Titan do be postin' some silly shit in the Chill. Way to grab it TOYH! haha!

"Tryin To Leave Quick He Ran Over Tha Mail Box Some Would Call Him A Rapid Mover" -- hahaha!

dont brake it ..lol...AXE-it

damn. ya see thas y i dont be puutin my name on front street like that. my shit'll get ripped the fuck apart. ill stik to stayin low key. haha. but damn yo, this was a good read. do you ever drop audio?

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Yo illest There's A Psycho On Tha Loose Have You Checked Tha Chill Lately?
if We Let Him Go Long Enough Titan Has Tha Potential To Even Kill Babies!

lol

This Kid Was Quick To Axe His Monitor it Must've Had A Tumor
i Think His Mom Was On Drugs During Pregnancy We'll Call Him An Acid Bloomer

Alright.

His Bitch Was Gettin Loud And He Hadda Question So He Axed it To Her
Tryin To Leave Quick He Ran Over Tha Mail Box Some Would Call Him A Rapid Mover

Hahah.

Claims To Have Strange Sex Fetishes Tha Kid Says He'll Smash On Site
Even With Trainin Wheels it's A Wonder How He Never Crashed His Bike

Good little joke.

Quick As A Flash Of Light i'll Smash Tha Kike 'Til it Seems Like A Massive Fight
i'll Even Slash His Wife And Leave With A Blank Stare Like illiterates Asked To Write

Good wordplay


Check Tha Chill French Maid Dresses? He's Even into Wearin Skirts
Sounds Like Sexual Frustration His Bitch Never Even Gave This Square A Jerk
i'll Be Quick To Floor Him But This is illest So i'll Air Him First
Gay Bashins illegal Though So He's A Faggot i Wouldn't Dare To Hurt

Nice concept.

i Dont Know if it's A Death Wish Or Sexual Fetish Tha Way He Takes Nines in Tha Rectum
When He Gets Arrested Even Police Are Afraid To Stand Behind To Check Him

I mean, this isn't going to redefine the wheel of hip hop disses, but it was perfect for what it was, some jokes and having a good time.

Cool shit.

This was purdy cool for a key....I'm diggin' the vibe....

purdy good with the multi's! punches were decent

you got my eyes blurry from the color tho'....dick

hey not bad man flow and comic value but imma get back at ya

Yo illest There's A Psycho On Tha Loose Have You Checked Tha Chill Lately?
if We Let Him Go Long Enough Titan Has Tha Potential To Even Kill Babies!
This Kid Was Quick To Axe His Monitor it Must've Had A Tumor
i Think His Mom Was On Drugs During Pregnancy We'll Call Him An Acid Bloomer
His Bitch Was Gettin Loud And He Hadda Question So He Axed it To Her
Tryin To Leave Quick He Ran Over Tha Mail Box Some Would Call Him A Rapid Mover
Claims To Have Strange Sex Fetishes Tha Kid Says He'll Smash On Site
Even With Trainin Wheels it's A Wonder How He Never Crashed His Bike

Lmao, thats Fucked up u Made um Out to Be a Retard

Quick As A Flash Of Light i'll Smash Tha Kike 'Til it Seems Like A Massive Fight
i'll Even Slash His Wife And Leave With A Blank Stare Like illiterates Asked To Write

LoL .. Liked How This Was Stitched Together.. Like the punch 2

Check Tha Chill French Maid Dresses? He's Even into Wearin Skirts
Sounds Like Sexual Frustration His Bitch Never Even Gave This Square A Jerk

Aight.. Bit Basic.

i'll Be Quick To Floor Him But This is illest So i'll Air Him First
Gay Bashins illegal Though So He's A Faggot i Wouldn't Dare To Hurt'

Lmaooo

i Dont Know if it's A Death Wish Or Sexual Fetish Tha Way He Takes Nines in Tha Rectum
When He Gets Arrested Even Police Are Afraid To Stand Behind To Check Him

aiight Lmao.

The Closer Could Of Been Better,'
You Most Likely Wrote This Quick.

It Was Decent, N had Some hard hitters but some Softer onez n Repeatz.
Potential For a New Style in the Structure etc,
Still was Worth The Read .. Keep It Up , Stay Up N Keep Dropping.