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5 bars, 24 hours.


he think he lifted ill drop him
he think he gifted ill box him
leave him shocked, stiff like i tazerd and botox'ed him
jackass nigga shoulda found another option
now he hurt and cryin cuz i johnny knox'ed him
u aint a wild boy,lil girl u no where near it
wait..wats that?..i think i smell teen spirit
he coming down, i think he need a quick lift
someone get him a line, sniff sniff, before he have a bitch fit
get up ur weight lifted, u still curlin lipstick

check



what's with S.O.S? shit, are you hopin for rescue?
i'll put your name behind the autopsy officers desk dude.

zilch out of ten bars, i didnt like one verse
i'll give you your next car, you'll lay in a black hearse

i'll only hit the trigga once, cus im just so precise
still for eternity, blood as cool as ice

whats with the tears? or are those for the people you kill?
you dont even know hip hop , i'll leave you just like ill will

nah, im just messin'. son, i dont wanna kill you
but when it comes to this shit, i will always out-skill you













my bad it was a couple minutes late
i was gettin yelled at

Vote goes 2 liftedspirit

He got u on dis line bad imo

what's with S.O.S? shit, are you hopin for rescue?
i'll put your name behind the autopsy officers desk dude
got u wit the hearse line- grimey
got u on da tat line- personal

SOS had good wordplay liked the jackass line
flow- tie

Overall I felt like LS got dis one.

damn.....no diss or anythin but only line i liked from spirit was the last one


nah. im jus messin son, i dont wanna kill you.
but wen it comes to this shit ill
always outskill you.

hahahaha. that shit was dope.



S.O.S

i found it hard to get past the first line. u puzzled me a bit. could be the weed. but i liked....


you aint a wild boy, lil girl u no where near it.
wait...whats that? i think i smell teen spirit.



hahahaha. i dunno tho fellas. everything seemed about even yo. yall prolly should go a lil longer. good shit






ok see what happens. i read em again. and vote for Spirit. damn. like i said tho. good shit

vote spirit!


came with more direct punches, and more complexity and flow!!

can break it down more if you wannt but i vote:

Liftedspirit

3-0 spirit, close it and updade it. thanx for voting everyone, and good battle lifted