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Three Times Two Equals One

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Re: Three Times Two Equals One

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ummmm....intresting..lol
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I really like this. Excellent structure and vocabulary. Good shit dude.

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yea dawg. shit is dope. had to read it bout 4 times jus so i can make sure i got it. i like that it made me think. kinda had to read it slow. but overall, way to bring sumtn different to this repetetive shit.
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Re: Three Times Two Equals One

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hmmm.. the notion that any of that thread could be true, is as bout as accurate as the mathmatical equation.

Way to bring it to light TOYH. You've dispelled several arguments in just a few words. :lol:
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not bad.. pretty well told
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This was purdy nice, I'm diggin' the concept
the use of numbers and the current motive of this
the thought process came across like it's been buggin' you for awhile

the beginning tho' is a hard touch on reality
a really nice piece I can dig it...now I think I know where to find your work...

keep writing
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