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Trainer Says i Need To Work For This Round..I Told Him...I Got To Die For Them To Win..


AYo Yo..

I Don't Discriminate I Eliminate,I Intimidate!..
My Strikes Will leave Your Eyes Close Like Drinking Sour Lemonade.
All You See is Leather Im A Animal., You Been-A-Prey
You Been Wanted To Quit Homie..So i Guess You Been-Afraid..
You Better Pray Like Christians Before Eating A Dinner Plate!..
Or Get Disaster Like This Was A Sinners Day!..
He Says hes A Rebel Well Ill Go To This Rebel's Home!.
Hooks Have His Head Ringing Like Sleeping Next To A Telephone!..
I Won't Stop Till I Die So i Guess Your Not Going To Go To Hell-Alone
So Leave Me The hell Alone!..Before i be A Gladiator like I used To Be In Ancient Rome!.


Idk I Just Keyed This

-- Mon Jan 18, 2010 11:28 pm --

Uppin For Votes

It was ok....nothing REAL impressing
...as far as I know? then again you made me frown with the telephone line

otherwise...a lil' more work and it'll be cool!
multi's are there, flow was kinda off towards the end
punches were alright....need some work

keep writing tho'!