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Envy

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Am I really that shallow
to envy you?
Your life just as bad as mine.
But never do you complain,
and you tell me to stay sane.
But is it possible?
Maybe I'm not sane.
Always being blamed.
Maybe that's why I envy you.

Is he really so stupid
to look up to you?
Your wrong doings always exploding in your face.
And you tell him not to worry.
I can't see how he can envy you.

Maybe it's how you carry yourself.
Maybe it's your good looks.
Maybe it's because you're so fucking vain
and all of us are shallow.
We envy you
so that we can be envied too.

I could care less if you give a damn.
I'll grow up to be just like you.
But I won't go as low
as to hit my kids.
I'm not sure why we would ever
envy you.

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Re: Envy

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Fuckin nice,girl!
I dig this, mos-def!
I like the whole vibe on this piece.
Nice drop indeed
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Re: Envy

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"I could care less if you give a damn.
I'll grow up to be just like you.
But I won't go as low
as to hit my kids." -- hello?

Sounds like a real argument there. Nice drop.
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Re: Envy

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Thanks guys, appreciate the feed.

I agree that it's not my best work by any means. I seem to lack inspiraion and time these days lol.

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