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Takeover

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 1:35 am
by Gizmo Duck
inoculations in Patients From Third World Nations/
They Shake more than Haitians with a Feeling of Fainting/
Free Masons and Archdiocese are Secret Societies/
Privately Hired, By Fallen Angels in Fire to Foresee the Prophecy/
Hypocrisy Breeds from there Pillars,there Theocracy becomes a Malicious Monopoly/
Bodies and Property Fall Vicious and Fast,Populations and Economies Fall into There Grasp/
Power and Privillage Replaces Hope and Wishes,Doubters and Critics are Destroyed by the Mass/
a Denomic Empire that Spread so Vast has Cast Spells on Souls From Future and Past/
so Cruel and Crass there Visions Implanted,Civilization Conforms to there Guidelines and Rantings/

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Re: Takeover

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 2:21 am
by Riggz
My pops is a mason.. watch yourself LOL!
"Hypocrisy Breeds from there Pillars,there Theocracy becomes a Malicious Monopoly/
Bodies and Property Fall Vicious and Fast,Populations and Economies Fall into There Grasp/" --- nice vocab and wordplay, Giz

Re: Takeover

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 3:48 am
by Gizmo Duck
thx for the feed

Re: Takeover

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 7:12 am
by eMCee Havic
this was a nice a piece, it's weird how well it flowed for such a on and off structure.. great vocab and flow tho keep um coming

Re: Takeover

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 8:54 am
by Gizmo Duck
thx for the feed man

Re: Takeover

Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:56 am
by complexity
Modern Defiance wrote:this was a nice a piece, it's weird how well it flowed for such a on and off structure.. great vocab and flow tho keep um coming
The structure wasn't even, but the rhyme schemes were. He left no rhyme behind with the call backs.

"Hypocrisy Breeds from there Pillars,there Theocracy becomes a Malicious Monopoly/
Bodies and Property Fall Vicious and Fast,Populations and Economies Fall into There Grasp/
Power and Privillage Replaces Hope and Wishes,Doubters and Critics are Destroyed by the Mass/
a Denomic Empire that Spread so Vast has Cast Spells on Souls From Future and Past/
so Cruel and Crass there Visions Implanted,Civilization Conforms to there Guidelines and Rantings/"

I thought that was very well executed and impressive.

Re: Takeover

Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:23 am
by Gizmo Duck
tx for the feed