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-- Tue Jan 12, 2010 10:33 am --

This cat is fake!! I already see through HIM, he needs 2 beat his feet n keep MOOVIN.. He a Yung Buck.. n aint even apart of G-UNIT!!,

My punchlines wud leave em in SHOCK,
He's ridin' my COCK n I aint even give him the keys 2 IT!!

Raps I speed through em like a GREEN BUICK, His TEAMS a NUISANCE n seems STUPID.. they all hopin 4 a shot so I gave em 1.. in a MEAN BULLET!!

I hustle n FLOW, Yung aint hustlin DOE..
He cries at strongarm robberies..
Lacks Balls n has no MUSCLE CONTROL,

Dont put ya foot in ya mouth n swallow ya TOES,
a elbow 2 ya face wud bust open n fracture ya NOSE..
then again maybe he'll get a kick out of it..
after I smack him n bash in his SKULL.

A final hit 2 DOSIA, Im so sick my nickname NAUSEA..
n I'll cum in his moms face cuz.. I/eye Like ejaculation in her CORNEA

Dont understand dont vote!!
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Multies: Tie - ThoUghT has more, but Yung's connect better.
Flow: Yung Dos
Punches: Tie - Both seemed sloppy to me. Dos, I've seen you do better. It looks like you created that real quickly. ThoUghT, you had a couple decent ones, but they could've been structured better.
Wordplay / Nameplay: Tie
Entertainment: Tie

In my opinion, this battle wasn't one of the better ones. I expected more out of Yung. And ThoUghT's structure was on the sloppy side. Since, this battle was all slopped up, I'm just gonna cast my vote according to the categories above. On a tied category, each of you will get half a point, so..

ThoUghT's score = 2
Yung Dos' score = 3

Overall: Yung Dosia

I'm not gunna Vote, Cuz Thought's a Good Friend ..


Nov ...


This cat is fake!! I already see through HIM, he needs 2 beat his feet n keep MOOVIN.. He a Yung Buck.. n aint even apart of G-UNIT!!,

Lmao ..you Went in.



My punchlines wud leave em in SHOCK,
He's ridin' my COCK n I aint even give him the keys 2 IT!!

No, cause the first line was a filler for nothing. The Second Line lacks Creativity if you really think About it, Yeah it was creative where u Was Going With it, But u gotta Think thats a general type of play dropped period. Avoid those homie


Raps I speed through em like a GREEN BUICK, His TEAMS a NUISANCE n seems STUPID.. they all hopin 4 a shot so I gave em 1.. in a MEAN BULLET!!



I hustle n FLOW, Yung aint hustlin DOE..
He cries at strongarm robberies..
Lacks Balls n has no MUSCLE CONTROL,

Lmao. could change the line in the middle

Dont put ya foot in ya mouth n swallow ya TOES,
a elbow 2 ya face wud bust open n fracture ya NOSE..

Aiight.. thats just rhyming, filler as they say lol
Don't put your foot in ya mouth? Nov.. u gotta avoid these

then again maybe he'll get a kick out of it..
after I smack him n bash in his SKULL.

nah it's lacking creativity, come on ..

A final hit 2 DOSIA, Im so sick my nickname NAUSEA..
n I'll cum in his moms face cuz.. I/eye Like ejaculation in her CORNEA

if u were tieing the nausea with Dosia, aiight.

N the second line is kind of Funny, but again the moms, penis Etc
i'm Not Saying i Don't Do It Myself Sometimes but This is Shyt U Gotta Avoid to better you skills.. N The Second Line Could of been Worded Better.


Nov You Showed a lot of elevation in my opinion with This Verse.
Up's n downs But you'll keep getting better if u Keep going in..

Good shit.

1-0 uppin

punches: yung
Flow; close but Yung
Content: Yung
Personal: Yung
multis: thought

vote; yung


this was a soft battle from both of you, but i thoink dosia just edged this one out!!!

Thanks for vottting!!!

2-0 uppn

thought verse seemed kinda amature, basic punch lines. good but nothin great.

dosia was a little better, a little more clever, saw it about even except for the "Punch this nigga in the face and leave Novel's Spread Out like a fuckin Library!!" that pushed my vote towards dosia

vote: dosia

Thanks4 Voting...

3-0

People sleepin on voting...ill see if thought is down to accept the vote since u dont have enuff posts...

Thanks either way

-- Wed Jan 20, 2010 1:46 pm --

Thanks4 Voting...

3-0

People sleepin on voting...ill see if thought is down to accept the vote since u dont have enuff posts...

Thanks either way