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10 Lines..

Due In 2 hrs from last check in.

This is my check.

house rules.

no bting

dickriding

hate

or crew votes..

g/l

check

-- Sat Jan 09, 2010 4:31 pm --

Pop the cap of a Dos Equies, then pour it in a mug gently
that's the only time you're ever gonna see 'im flow steady

He stomps his feet and throws a fit if people don't vote for him
so when this is all over with and I knock 'im out, he's probly gonna go slit his throat and wrists

I'll have 'im chokin' quick cause compared to me, his rhyme flow is shit
This match is the text equivalent of Tre Tru and Joey Piff

The word Yung implies he's dumb and Dosia says that he's the bomb
but he's straight up lyin' cause he only bombs when he grabs a fuckin' mic and tries to bust

I'll hit Yung with a dose of dope and leave 'im comatose
It's over, Dos. People will forget your real name and refer to you as so and so

360:
Pop the cap of a Dos Equies, then pour it in a mug gently
that's the only time you're ever gonna see 'im flow steady
1.5/5 work on your rhyme scheme ala “gently/steady”, try rhyming more than just the last syllable of the last word.
He stomps his feet and throws a fit if people don't vote for him
so when this is all over with and I knock 'im out, he's probly gonna go slit his throat and wrists
1.5 personal is there, you just didn’t finish it well.

I'll have 'im chokin' quick cause compared to me, his rhyme flow is shit
This match is the text equivalent of Tre Tru and Joey Piff
2.5/5 best rhyme you’ve done so far
The word Yung implies he's dumb and Dosia says that he's the bomb
but he's straight up lyin' cause he only bombs when he grabs a fuckin' mic and tries to bust
1.5/5 this didn’t rhyme at all 360, I see where you were trying to go tho…
I'll hit Yung with a dose of dope and leave 'im comatose
It's over, Dos. People will forget your real name and refer to you as so and so
1.5/5 360 you gotta come wittier dude! You have got to put more effort in developing creativity of some form or fashion, whether it’s flow, rhymes, punchlines or personals.. you gotta hurt your opponent some kind of way in order to contend.
8.5/25 – below average
Dosia:
Dude claims he a pimp, talk the talk, and pick up girls with all the booty...
Yeah right...The only Good Game 360 Has.. is Call of Duty...!!
3/5 Funny
Now you would say, your a gangster and actin up a fool today...
Kid my chopper gon' split Three Six in half...Like releasing Juicy J...!! *three six mafia*
2/5 – hate explained verses.. I got it without the foot note
Understand i move pounds of weed, u couldnt have my money or my dank ammount...
360's broke as a joke...nigga got his name by checking his Bank account..!!
2/5 what?
'See ur getting better'...but take ur seat like u entered a reservation...
Cuz u still whack, and dont belong in this forum...need to check the Center of elevation..!!
3.5/5 great personal
Now see what he lacks? are balls and knee caps, and these raps...
Again ill leave u detached...So u can keep tryin to lite it, but u never deserved this Re Match..!!
2.5/5 – you put just enough effort into this to win it didn’t you?
13/25 – Average

Dosia gets my vote

LOl..yeah keyed it in bout 15.

but if u dont get the bank account line...his name is 360 im sayin he has that much money in there...

You cant consider this a battle.
Straight slaughter is more like it.

I am just gonna co-sign everything Riggz said.


Vote = Dosia.

thanks, 2-0 uppn last vote