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5 bars/10 Lines...

Yu got other battles. I'll give yu 24hours or so.



'House Rules'

3-0 KO

4-1 TKO

first to 5 wins..

Usual shit. No dick riding ect. Not that be a problem. Since we both new. Check in if ya want. Dont matter.

Cool will drop by tomorrow most likely hopefully tonight

-- Wed Jan 06, 2010 5:55 pm --

Will drop tonight...do the same

Aint Even On My Level.


Beating Me? Maybe. Only Since Ya Seem To Be Hand Given-The-Props..Seriously Dude. I'll Merk Yu. How Can Yu Take A Weak Victory?? Accepting Plex's Sympathy-Drops??(FUCKING WEAK) I'LL PROVE |DOS| Aint Shit. He Barely Got A Mind Of His Own. Dude Take Orders... Like Computers With CMD-PROMPTS!!..

I'll Son' Yung. This Dude Aint Nothing, His 'Punches Frown'd Upon' Like Husbands Tryna 'Beat-Spouses!!' I'll Knock Ya From The Inside Duke, So Yu Bleed-Fountains... Because Ink have Dosia 'Falling Apart From The Inside Out' Like 'Cheap-Houses!!!!'


Yu Dont Have A Clue In Fact Kid. This Dude Better 'Watch What He say!' Like Some 'News-And-Anchors'...This Stooge He Knew-I-Slang-It. . Was Proved-I-Damage.. i'll Take This Actor 'Out The Picture'. Like 'Directors-Moving-Cameras'!!!


Are Yu Serious? ......
Claiming Dudes Stole A Battle Style? Likes Its A Fucking Rare-Known-Text? Nah Yu On Some Dumb Shit. But Infact, I Could Care-No-Less. Since Dosia Barely On Pare With Fair-Known-Vets. Only Time Yu See 'Yung Above The Line'? Is 'Signing His Name' On Cash Loan-Cheques.

Yu Aint Ill Duke. Im-Blazing-It-Yeah?? Yu All Talk Too. Throw Him A Death Sentence Like Cats That Be Facing-The-Chair!!. Because In Reality Dude. We Dont See Ya/Dosia Like Hype'd Shows That Dont Make-It-To-Air!!.


Dont Get It Dont Vote. Need Explanations. Ask.

Keep Up.

will drop today

-- Thu Jan 07, 2010 11:11 am --

ill vote on this later but Ink it looked like each of your lines was a bar try and cut down cuz your defently spittin like twice dosia is

Multies: Ink
Flow: YungDosia - It's not that Ink's rhymes didn't flow well, but they were too long. If his bars were shorter, he would've probably took this category.
Punches: Tie
Wordplay: Ink
Nameplay: YungDosia
Structure: YungDosia

In my mind, this battle was very close, but I'm not gonna cast my vote as a tie, so I vote for YungDosia.

Ite thanks

1-0 upps

I was looking forward to this battle… I knew it would be filled with punches…
First off Ink, your bar structure threw me for a loop.. they seem awfully stretched. Either that or you got a 2 for 1 sale going on. But here’s my breakdown…

Beating Me? Maybe. Only Since Ya Seem To Be Hand Given-The-Props..Seriously Dude. I'll Merk Yu. How Can Yu Take A Weak Victory?? Accepting Plex's Sympathy-Drops??(FUCKING WEAK) I'LL PROVE |DOS| Aint Shit. He Barely Got A Mind Of His Own. Dude Take Orders... Like Computers With CMD-PROMPTS!!..
3/5 I liked the 2 lines of this 4 line bar, nice multies and nice punch with the cmd prompt line

I'll Son' Yung. This Dude Aint Nothing, His 'Punches Frown'd Upon' Like Husbands Tryna 'Beat-Spouses!!' I'll Knock Ya From The Inside Duke, So Yu Bleed-Fountains... Because Ink have Dosia 'Falling Apart From The Inside Out' Like 'Cheap-Houses!!!!'
3/5 Another nice punch with an awful amount of fillers ie (This Dude Aint Nothing, 'Punches Frown'd Upon' Like Husbands Tryna 'Beat-Spouses!!) You could’ve ripped that whole multi out and had 1 decent bar.

Yu Dont Have A Clue In Fact Kid. This Dude Better 'Watch What He say!' Like Some 'News-And-Anchors'...This Stooge He Knew-I-Slang-It. . Was Proved-I-Damage.. i'll Take This Actor 'Out The Picture'. Like 'Directors-Moving-Cameras'!!!
2/5 More fillers with (Like Some 'News-And-Anchors'...This Stooge He Knew-I-Slang-It.) Plus I’m noticing now that you’re rhyming two different lines with in a Bar. AABB all with in one bar when AA BB AA BB would be more appropriate.

Are Yu Serious? ......
Claiming Dudes Stole A Battle Style? Likes Its A Fucking Rare-Known-Text? Nah Yu On Some Dumb Shit. But Infact, I Could Care-No-Less. Since Dosia Barely On Pare With Fair-Known-Vets. Only Time Yu See 'Yung Above The Line'? Is 'Signing His Name' On Cash Loan-Cheques.
3/5 Tight punch Ink, but it’s too damn long man. Again you got two bars in one, and either you spit fast as hell or you’re not worried about flow.

Yu Aint Ill Duke. Im-Blazing-It-Yeah?? Yu All Talk Too. Throw Him A Death Sentence Like Cats That Be Facing-The-Chair!!. Because In Reality Dude. We Dont See Ya/Dosia Like Hype'd Shows That Dont Make-It-To-Air!!.
2/5 Punch was ok, didn’t like the “Blazing-it-yeah” syllable.

13/20 Honestly I would’ve scored you higher had you not continuously put 2 lines in one bar because I liked the punches and multisyllable rhyming.

Dosia
Someone told me he gangsta…and I swear those men lied
Cuz if theres ever a fight…ull watch Ink run out like my fuckin pen died..!!
4/5 HAHAHAHAHA!
How u gonna be famous, when u spit and nothing sick comes out…
Bitch only time u ready to blow…is when a dicks by ur mouth…!!
2/5 Played Dosia.. blow and dick… I’m sure that’s never been used before.

Fuck this punk! Im a give him shots like who serve a drink…
Pussy shoulda signed to Irv Gotti…the way I Murder Ink..!!
3/5 With more thought this would’ve been the perfect multisyllable punch (ie Somebody call Gotti, cause I’m about to Murder Ink.. or something to that effect)

U shouldn’t clash wit vets…lines so long, don’t wanna hear that whack text…
Cuz ur Bars are so stretched….they can only be compared to Giraffe Necks..!!
2/5 Stretched bars and Giraffe necks… (played?) naw that’s never been done before… ya think????

Shouldn’t even match ya bars nigga…I don’t respect this guy…
Cuz like bars and votes….this battle shouldve been over in less then 5…!!
2/5 I read this 4 times and something’s missing in this punch, and it was kind of a choppy sloppy ending.

13/20 – damn point system! Well, last but not least I’ll judge by the one that I could flow to better which was obviously Dosia’s.. I can remove a few words to make it less choppy, but I can’t spit those bars Ink dropped unless I was trying to flow to house music.

Vote = Dosia

Nice battle with witty punches. Ink appears to be shaking off the rust.

Ite....guess people thought this was close.

2-0 ups

-- Thu Jan 07, 2010 2:16 pm --

and my 2nd bar i dont think has been used before riggz...never seen it atleast. it was actually wordplay maybe u didnt get that line "ready to blow" as in ready to get signed....lol all good.

upps

Multies:Ink
Personals:Ink
Wordplay:Tie
Nameplay:TD
Flow:YD

Vote:Dosia gets the push.
Very close battle, Dosia takes it by a very slight margin, I just felt it a little bit more, it was a hard choice though.

Ite thanks for votes peoples...

3-0 KO

can a mod plz close this..

Lol said ya'll will hate my style. Just how we did it, Like i said.... Text and audio to me... Are totally different. All about Creativity. Anyways
. Gratz.

Keep Up.

yeah i agree doggy ^^^ Most of the cats on here don't know theres a difference between Text and audio and how there prepared! anyways i prolly would've called it a tie as well...with a push maybe to INK cuz he was a bit more Creative and had more complex Flow, and multies! everything else pretty much a Tie!



Good BAttle.

Close and update@!

Appreciated Q. Doubt yu'll see me battling much anyways. So im not too worried about changing my style for text. BUT.. I'll try cut back if yu do see me battling again.

Just felt like checking if i still had it in me.. I aint lost in a while too.. Shiet moafuka!!!! playing. hahaha.

Yo pretty dope dosia.

Keep Up Fam.

Thanks fam...u nice wit it tooo, and keep battling.