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This is my check

mic check 1,2 1,2

see how much i Inspire, Said my name so many times like a Dick Rider, so Mount up/
ya Loses Column is Huge while ur wins is a Donut/
dam my rhymes get Personal, but i'm also Versatill/
Spit at ya with the Shredda and put Shells to ya Back like Turtles/
Ask ya girl I'm That Big, u just the Rat King,hit ya Chest and Make ya do a Back Spin/
u Homo, thats the real 360,i know ya Dig me, you've Fucked "Many Men", Probley 50/


ok ok i'll stop

vote ppl.........

your vote shouldn't count cuz you a hater but i don't care.i'm run of the mill and a buffalo bill............

Um No im not a hater....that chat box message was after i voted.

it was an honest vote u lost plz dont make me go into detail cuz i will. u did not have one good line

Yew Neek™ wrote:your vote shouldn't count cuz you a hater but i don't care.i'm run of the mill and a buffalo bill............

No, you're not A buffalo bill. You're that fag named Buffalo Bill that tucked his dick in the movie Silence of the Lambs. See, shit is over your head.

I usually don't explain my rhymes, but you seem to need it explained to you.

360 won no reason to explain both where pretty weak tho

360
I'll chop his balls off with a sawzall, then call 'em Yew Nick
I'm a moil. You're a skinhead. I'm offin' you, dick
2/5 Flowed well, but the punch was weak. Nice try with the name play, but I suggest not trying so hard.. should come naturally

A yew is actually a tree, so watch me plant 'im in the dirt
It's hard t'keep a straight face cause this man is in a skirt
3/5 I liked this bar; however points off for the set up. It wasn’t there. But the punch was.

I do damage with a verse that drains health from his bars
He only bangs dope with a belt roped around his upper arm
2/5 Again, the first line should set up the punch, the 2nd line should deliver the blow. But liked the 2nd line punch

I'm unique, so Yew Neek is just run of the mill
In this division, I'm a Patriot. He's Buffalo Bill
1/5 no set up here 360, plus it sounded elementary.

And I know his every move cause I'm Hannibal Lecter
After this, he's gonna front and say I hafta do better
.5/5 this is the closer, and if you were surrounded by a crowd of folks listening to this against an opponenant
And you ended with this bar.. what kind of response do you think you would’ve gotten?

but he's at his keyboard steady backspacin' letters
0/0 not even sure why this bar is here….

Yew Neek –
see how much i Inspire, Said my name so many times like a Dick Rider, so Mount up/
ya Loses Column is Huge while ur wins is a Donut/
1/5 maybe I just missed the punch here, and the personal was weak.
dam my rhymes get Personal, but i'm also Versatill/
Spit at ya with the Shredda and put Shells to ya Back like Turtles/
1/5 – dude are you serious? My 8 year old could’ve wrote this!
Ask ya girl I'm That Big, u just the Rat King,hit ya Chest and Make ya do a Back Spin/
u Homo, thats the real 360,i know ya Dig me, you've Fucked "Many Men", Probley 50/
… you know what… fuk it 360 wins breakin this verse down is a waste of time. Sorry man. But at least 360 tried.. Got Damn dude!

A yew is actually a tree, so watch me plant 'im in the dirt
It's hard t'keep a straight face cause this man is in a skirt
Lol..

I do damage with a verse that drains health from his bars
He only bangs dope with a belt roped around his upper arm
Hmm. not really.

I'm unique, so Yew Neek is just run of the mill
In this division, I'm a Patriot. He's Buffalo Bill
Lol. not really

And I know his every move cause I'm Hannibal Lecter
After this, he's gonna front and say I hafta do better
Lol eh.

but he's at his keyboard steady backspacin' letters
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see how much i Inspire, Said my name so many times like a Dick Rider, so Mount up/
ya Loses Column is Huge while ur wins is a Donut/
Eh. No

dam my rhymes get Personal, but i'm also Versatill/
Spit at ya with the Shredda and put Shells to ya Back like Turtles/
No again.

Ask ya girl I'm That Big, u just the Rat King,hit ya Chest and Make ya do a Back Spin/
u Homo, thats the real 360,i know ya Dig me, you've Fucked "Many Men", Probley 50/
Omg.. Not even close.



Woooooow....Try again.

Vote/ 360... Onesided. Keep trying Yew... I aint gon' hate on yu. But seriously... Dont get angry at heads when they giving yu they opinion. Yu need work fam.. Alot.