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Darkness deepens every day, it's terrible
Pressed to a temple...Cold steel and black Metal.
Hang-up the phone, don’t touch that dial
Trial and error, a narrow escape
Videotapes, arrested with footage of rapes
Fuck Guerillas, illest humans don’t deal with lesser apes
It's fate bumpin Nappy Root's 'No Static',
My ballistics statistics and Silent crimes, so realistic!
Consider me feeling like Rocky the MC, a Devil inside perceiving me.
Fucking a pregnant chick...closest I get to child pornography
Blood diamonds. Blood from miners, blood for food, air or water
Gotten hell and high water, got ten axmen screaming in the slaughter!
A young man with big plans that can’t stagger or falter
Heavy Artillery and swagger in my vicinity,
Vanity and profanity inside a police facility
Calmly, light dies in the city.
Cops cheaply keepin an ethics committee busy
preaching Ten Commandments on a Tuesday
I'm angry; I'm treating paltry forces crudely without pity,

I'm a dark messiah, screaming at Allah
putting broken promises and bodies in rows behind ya
It's pure chaos the betrayal of a boss
A psycho realm of pathos and loss.
Logos of lies, hardcore chemicals and all hope cries.
Stories of forbidden high rise adventures
Hustlers with golden dentures in chambers writing chapters
So they sons and daughters still in diapers get some dollars (Feel me?)
Guns for hire, tech titans with new toys for barter
Doctors, mothers, fathers, daughters, burning embers.
Slave trade involving freighters, involving skull fractures!
I turn a 'Gang-green' when a wound festers
haters with hammers, healers with honors
Hunters prowling bunkers, raiders raiding rafters
Reapers and rangers coveting the cover on my scriptures.
For a fee, I was firmly beat down like locusts swarming a tree
My retaliation, declaring victory with an indivisible army
Whose creed is void of apathy like Judas capture at the hands of Roman Authorities!
My soul solidified like Pangaea's priorities. Fuck, I got the munchies.
I need a concessionaire, after all its '4:20' somewhere!

yeah this piece is my style i dig that dark shit man..
your rhyme style was pretty unique for a rap tho, it was more like def poetry.
but shit i like it tho.. and its been slept on for a while.

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Consider me feeling like Rocky the MC, a Devil inside perceiving me.
Fucking a pregnant chick...closest I get to child pornography

Thx for the feed man. Ya, I tend to use more poetry in my drops. It makes a deeper impact IMHO.
Ya my stuff does get slept on a lot.
But I dont post for feed, really.
I post cause I like to write.
I know I am ill. I dont need anyone to tell it to me.

YUP THIS PIECE C AME REAL HARD!! i liked the whole concept and how you put this all together!! Nice shit dog!

Darkness deepens every day, it's terrible
Pressed to a temple...Cold steel and black Metal.
Hang-up the phone, don’t touch that dial


thats aiight for text^ but for audio That shit would be Stretchd

My ballistics statistics and Silent crimes, so realistic!
Consider me feeling like Rocky the MC, a Devil inside perceiving me.
Fucking a pregnant chick...closest I get to child pornography

Like This ..


Anyways This was cool .. Feel you could Come harder you are Elevating though.


Stay up, Keep Dropping.

i loved this piece, very good work, you'll tell soon enough how close to my style it is.

I am glad you enjoyed it Giz.
I hope to read some of your work A.S.A.P!